Black Poetry : MRS.Southener

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like deep dirty south
    she gives a smile radiant
    her beauty like da solace
    as the sun brushing cross
    as deep in the fields flowers
    dance in magnificent core
    beyond boundaries of a
    lovely ballet with such belief
    inside the wind sweep
    she sing such a tune of
    enchanting lullaby
    as the setting sun drench
    and the moon rise da night
    glow of Mrs. southener gleam
    mesmerizing da souls
    and the black farmers hand
    at once she become her own
    friend bringing a great devastation
    in her beauty from twinkles and
    taps of sparkles above swooping
    hopes & dreams from the river
    flow with a magnetic charm
    cool breeze and summery joy
    pose a heart of the black night
    and soulful spray of a woman scorn

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    Is Mrs. Southerner any kin to Sadie? Sadie fights for rights, Mrs. Southerner...she sounds like she wants some payback. Liked the way you drew the reader in, and then pow, the twist.
     
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    sista indeed of sadie yet she da southener black soul of hope and help
    listen to Mrs.Southener comforting twist in pt.2 .........Thankz watz for
    the visit and love on dis sista flip
     
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    this was a deep read read smooth she holds her mans hand in all but seems something wrong...i feel a twist coming on....i like this captured is the word....
    looking for more....Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Rich....

    You're one of the deepest brothas I know...dapz.

    :thanks: for showing a brotha how it's done.

    :toast:
     
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    Nice flow, Rich. Waiting for part 2 :fairy:
     
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    Hmmmm very delicious sir!!!!
     
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    I likes this. Very unique write....so glad you shared.

    -Muse
     
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    tru dat angel.........
    indeed she move softly cross da moment
    expressing da soul lace hand n' hand thankz

    moneyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.............................
    word up thankz a million brutha for the visit of
    the Mrs.Southener

    jazzymoonchild .......thank u indeed pt.2 coming
    as she float within from da other side of her sista

    propheticnsyght............thankz a million

    muse .....thank u so much for da love on dis
    soft gentle flow
     
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    this really took me there, brother. back about 150 years ago. what a poignant and amazing picture.
     
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