Black Poetry : Mrs.Southener Majestic II

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I
    heard da distance
    of piercing thunder
    rumbling from da
    westwing in gallops
    sweepin in broken lim
    sacrificed
    I
    hear da spine chillin cries
    of da innocent
    and da connection behold
    forth my heart mound
    cross da fields of everlastin
    on a path to leave a trail
    which seem to fail thee
    Mrs.southener shout
    accepting da pain and
    not to complain
    days on earth not accounted
    until we meet at our very own
    existance of presence
    perhaps each of us has a
    special job to do and direction
    to fulfill inside a journey
    so the food to feed from thy
    table is made to exchange
    she leave no mistakes
    washing souls of sin
    wit hissop & grace knowing
    wings never fly but every
    eagle as angel get them
    i see the poor southen folks
    yet not shelter, ailing
    i knoweth it's an fantasy
    of illisional myth that will
    go and be gone my day
    starts at da crow of da
    rooster and set behind
    da helms of dusk dawn
    for my feet is sore
    and handz sting
    my mind free set fly
    without wings on da
    majestic ........ :deal: :spin:


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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love when you bring it like this...
    within every line i was captured
    you are a very deep thinker
    for now your in that mood
    i so love about you
    when you write with
    that 3 eye... :wink:

    flow head on...very creative
    enjoying the series of
    Mrs.Southener
    a strong black woman she is!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Mrs. Southerner seems to have arms to comfort and an understanding heart...Must be difficult to keep this up, day in and day out. Keep her spirit alive thru that pen of yours....
     
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    So many Mrs southerners
    out here working to heal
    lost souls.

    Very concsious scribe Brother Rich!!!
    We do need to keep them in mind!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u angel she is the power of love & understanding
    she come in hope & peace and surely grace hear her live
    next friday night !

    Thankz watz indeed she is and it's no easy task but her heart knows
    and she fulfill da grace as her sistah sadie do whom a fighter she a
    peacemaker hear da twins speak live next friday night !

    Thankz purple true indeed we have to keep da lost souls at heart
    and bring forth life to them without da word it would be in vain
    do hear da twin sistas speak next friday night live
    Da peacemaker and Da fighter of rights !
     
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    Aw, $$RICH$$y, this is a beautiful follow up to part 1. I am captivated.
     
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    humble thankz gempis ya a rare gem for real !
     
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    drifting in the lane on da majestic of cares
    whispers flowing freely upon da southen land
    headed up north ova east cross west all 4 corners
    da world floats in a wind sweep to be heard from
    heart & truth as Mrs.Southener move rapidly in .
     
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    "washing souls of sin with hyssop and grace"
    nice $rich nice..
    we need that -all of us- a Ms.Southener
    full giving us comfort and ease and love

    now i've got to find Part I...i miss so much...gee
     
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    thank u so much
    indeed she bring this warmth to heart
    she on maybe the second page now !
     
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