Black Poetry : Mr.RIGHT ~vs~Brutha Wrong !!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I'm tired of u , not being true
    all ya lies and cheating too
    coming round like u own dis beautiful woman home
    fussing, fighting , doing her wrong no no:nono: pal
    dis ain't going on !

    what who u thing u r Mr.Right
    step back before i cut off ya lights
    dis my thang i do as pleased
    get ove here gal down on ya knees
    see my man i rule so back off before i act a fool

    hold it ! Punk
    she no dog who u think ya be making her crawl
    dis woman is a Queen u brutha Wrong only a
    bad dream ....
    come to me babe let me kiss those tears
    i'll be ya protector away from fears
    dis not love at all can't keep my cool
    when u beckon and call
    now my man move to da side
    dis no longer where this beauty reside .....

    what u say cow ! if u move.........................

    Mr.Wrong i told once respect this Gem
    before i break these tims in ya butt
    forever u walk wit da funny strut
    let the lady make her choice
    she been raised she have a voice:maddd:

    o'kay Mr. Right she will show u who's her delight
    tell him wit ya skank butt and damnit hurry up!

    standing their all confused:confused: don't know
    who to choose will she win or will she lose

    hey babe allow me to cover u wit care
    be their when ya feelings bare
    let me love u right take ya love up in flyte
    caress u when u tired
    sho u compassion and tender lovin care
    embrace u in comfort , sho u a rapture so true
    dis PUNK Mr.Wrong no good 4 u
    listen to u intently as u speak
    babe ur a gem a love so unique
    respect and honor ur beings
    be faithful & loyal
    not fuss and cuss pick a fight coz my day wasn't right
    but trust and be trusted wit understanding
    not like dis fool u never understood '
    now tell it let it be 2 of us make it a we:love:

    man ..............move back gurl what it's gonna be
    hell u know i don't have time for dis we stuff
    but u is my thang is this so call Mr. Right gonna lay out
    da diamond rang? will he be all he say or is it some
    bull type play game just to claim a piece of ya twang
    i give u a few buck i kiss u at night ....yeah i know
    i love to fight but i am ya light
    don't be fooled by this dude ...look at him all shaky not cool
    i rule ya butt

    now crawl for me show him i am the treat
    and if he be good i might let u give him some
    :D

    sweet lady i tired of dis wrongful guy
    see together it can be a U & I
    he means u no hope don't give this nut da rope
    come to a bliss of love see i am da love from above
    i play not and care a lot
    Mr.wrong time to go u had ya silly show
    i will not hear no more (((((BOOOOOOM))))
    sorry babe i had to knock him to da flo
    disrespecting call names like ya body his he claim
    shame on u for being treated dis way
    worry not Mr.Right here to take u away
    say da word !!! as i kiss her cheek:kiss:
    my love is real and sweet coz a Queen as u
    wit all dem desires of love :heart: soft and meek
    tyme to gop from dis joker before i do another crossova

    pt.2 coming soon ! Mr.RIGHT brutha Wrong:rolleyes:
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    talk about decisions. There is the obvious one, but some folks walk right past the obvious. Waiting for two sir!!!!
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed most do they love the wrong for da wrong reasons
    and true love awaits .......not so funny how so many miss
    the path of joy out the sorrow of pain !!
    pt.ll will make it's claim..........Thank u Royal_T 4 reading me
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is engaging work!
    Mr wrong be trippin' lol
    I know she got to pick Mr Right!
    we're(the readers) rootin for her!
    Peace!
     
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    If only All Queens Knew their worth. So sad, But there is always hope. Brilliant scribe Rich!
     
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    lol...........indeed
    hope poeticly she do
    and make him her boo
    but if Mr.wrong moan
    and groan she might
    be guided wrong
    hummmm!
    pt.ll will tell
    from dis poetic tail
     
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    $$RICH$$, that was tight!!!!
    I wish if I could write
    Half as good
    as you do..
    (don't laugh I 'm trying...)
     
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    Mahogany_Brown
    ya flow is as sweet as pie
    dis truely i will not lie
    i love ya flava of scribe
    da deep feelin inside
    just continue ya vibe
    ur a great poet to me ........and surely the whole family
    Thank u ........pt.ll will open eyez coming soon !
     
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    lost love magical tune
    she felt dis from her room
    Mr.Right heard da call
    step in to break da fall
    she wave in joy been wrongs
    love toy in a painful shame
    but couldn't part to say a name
    this game of crazy love
    was a feast a treat
    warm embraces enter mental mind
    feels ummmm! so devine
    but da love side to one side
    will she remain is dis where
    her heart reside part 2 bring da truth
    of a love cased in spell
    maybe she will move to another place
    seek happiness and dewell in comfort
    i wonder
     
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