Black Poetry : Mr.President can you make.........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Jul 18, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. President why offer the world promises you cant keep
    like for instance
    if this was the land of the free
    why do I still see invisible colored signs everywhere
    Its amazing how our leaders now and old have came and gone
    and still there's no better tomorrow
    just pain and sorrow
    because now were seemed to be living in the last days
    why because I can see the sign but can you
    you know were living in the last days if your company laid off workers without benefits
    and where do this ties into the President
    he ought to make laws that protect us when we lose jobs and faced with the reality that your now homeless
    no protection, no money just plain put out on the streets
    with no security
    but yet we can throw our money elsewhere
    while help here is scarce
    yep I said scare
    why the old folks ninety years old are working in grocery stores, restaurants, and sitting with other old elderly people (sad as hell)
    just so that they can get their medicine to keep them going
    but do they govt care no sorry you make to much money old woman
    get out here and slave some more we just feel with your hard earned pension its enough (so old woman say yessem boss I's go back to the field some mo)
    so she must as we all do, do what we gotta do
    is this scene right hell no
    but what do we do (turn the otha cheek)
    who's tired of rolling over, and playing dead
    I sure as hell tired of being sick and tired
    and something must be done about
    who cares if you cheat on your wives, who cares if you have an important golf game with your pals, who cares if your living your life on the hog
    while your sipping on cold glass of champagne
    Ill be sipping on my suga water cant afford to buy kool-aid
    cause we cant seem to get relief from high gas prices or electricity
    shames isnt it while i bet the other countries look back an laugh at this comedy
    the world produced
    if i could ask the President one question what would it be
    i probably say

    Mr. President can you be honest with the world and tell us if tomorrow will bring on a new day.
    Because I learned the only person that going to save me wont be man but my Heavenly Father.
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aight this is dope and got spiritual at the end there. Hmmmm.... Dear Mr. President are you really the anti-christ? That is my question... lol....
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to defiantson..........

    thanks for the love papi. for real tho
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No doubt got to show love your way you always do it to me... oh read what I left on asimplepoets poet. hers was dope but I had to add to it. you know me. lol.... But that poem she wrote was dope as hell I can't even front.

    Mannie
     
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    This was real deep nevar. Keepin it real as always. Much love for ya.

    AM:)
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankya sister for the love shown to me always, always
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa deeply felt and heard sista Nevar u took me there on this one .
     
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    drop it like its hot!!!

    Bush need to read dat!!!!!!!

    word up!

    nice read poet
     
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    If the President were to read this, he would probably do what he does best, respond with yet another lie. You're certainly flowing with the truth.
     
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    You know I'm mad with the president too! but I realize that placing the blame on one imperfect man isn't gonna solve our current situation. See what we got to realize is that Bush is a "World" Leader not a "Spiritual" Leader! He will never get it right if you ask me. That's why we all have to step up to serve the purpose. We all are capable leaders that why God put us here and its really going to take our own initiative and faith to change this thing around for the better. Alright I'm through preaching and might I add I enjoyed your work! Write on Sistagyrl!
     
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