Black Poetry : "Mr. Good Bar"

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now woman always asks me whats Mr. Good Bar
    Whats this thing that makes woman fen like tunes from a guitar/
    Makes your mind feel helpless sex can go far
    You got me going crazy long and sexy-yes im real hard/
    Im light complextion yes sweety you need this
    Like you need Jesus sweety baby you need this/
    Other men talk about what they want and how to get it
    I make moves provide tools-ten inches yes I did it/
    Its the simplicity of making you feel so good
    Taking pictures-creating porno scenes in the hood/
    Relax sexy jigga said let your conscious be free
    Tantrum make love then warm you some tea/
    Showing you a real man thats the "Good Bar" in me
    Thats a sexual confession-this is a lovers plea
    Not always about sex but forfilling fantasies
    Wanna see how making love in the black on black phantom be/
    Thats a black car and black rims see
    You mezmorized I can tell that your wanting me/
    "Mr. Good Bar"
     
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    :sleep: .........u need :help:
    2 hott 4 me 2 trot:dance:
    so ALL women need u huh?:?:
     
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    Mr. Good Bar, Mr. Good Bar
    I see you tryn’ to melt me
    With ya slick lines and personality
    But its not quite that easy you see

    I got that chocolate kiss that’s laced with
    My sensual-ness igniting a fire thats sure to
    Make your body retire and retreat because
    4Ever’s luv is oh so sweet

    You wanna make me fen and scream
    Be addicted to you and need to be weaned
    Create sexy porno scenes
    I know you see me in your dreams

    And sometimes it seems like reality
    Cuz ya 10 inch tool is reachn' out for me
    I hope your thinkn’ with the right head
    Luxury cars with rims to match
    Will not lead you to my bed

    I need you to sex my mind and my heart
    Give me a reason to be melting and falling all apart
    callin’ you from the start of the morning
    till the sun goes down at nite
    make me need your luv like I need air
    to flow through my wind pipes

    Im a ride or die chick with a wallstreet attitude
    I know when you look at my curvy figure it exudes
    Erotic and passionate interludes
    And for the right brotha I’m a bet that you just can’t lose

    Mr. Good Bar do you really want to take a walk that far
    To 4EVERLAND, be my King, my luv,
    Hold my soft-n- gentle hands
    lay my body down and show me you’re the MAN!!!

    Then I suggest you begin
    orchestrating your master plan

    By the way I have no sexual fantasies
    If the thought is in my mind
    I make it real for you and me

    I don’t drink tea, only Starbucks Coffee

    :smooch:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweety here is the other side of me
    Its time for you to melt sweety


    Im the black nasdaq your stock maker
    Lets make moves im trading at a plus 15 haters/
    Baby 4ever get caught in my world
    I own my business can you cherish that gurl/
    My own house my own car and im 27
    Sweety pick your lip up-this aint quite heaven/
    Cook for you and clean I can do that
    Rent you a movie and sing to you I can do that/
    Spiritually sunshine we can make this work
    God got me out of the gutter and 40hrs I work/
    Sometimes overtime but that to get what we need
    Not cars but a bigger house they all envy-me/
    Cause my queen which is you is more than a reality
    Its the possiblity that never expectedlike a formality/
    I can wine and dine 4ever-Make love 4ever
    Touch you there-watch you scream-you guessed it-4ever/
    My luv this is a text commitment im yours and you mine
    So what are you waiting for kiss me if ur mine/
    Im your "Good Bar"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    layin the message right
    for her sensual delight
    when she ready by night
    Mr. Good Bar in sight
    droppin it hot ...............
     
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    alright now mr. goodbar meet laffy taffy. man whats next flo on tant.
     
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    Tyte flo backTantrum:)

    Ok Mr. Good Bar I see you wanna take this far
    Toot- toot, beep- beep
    Im stepping on the gas
    bout to sho my a** with some class

    I’m not trippin’
    you workin’ with a little sumthn’ sumthn’
    there is nothing more sexier to me
    than
    A hard working BLACK BROTHA

    So you think I can get caught in your world
    Share a few meals watch a movie
    you want me to be your girl

    Then put your seat beat on and brace your self
    As I begin to twist and twirl
    leave your mind and body
    In an orgasmic swirl
    because if I do infiltrate your world
    there’s 1 thing for sure you will know

    I am not
    a
    GIRL

    I am
    a
    WOMAN

    Growner than Growner
    That can make you moan all nite long
    From the essences of my sexiness

    that

    Will cloud your mind
    make you forget how to rhyme on time

    You say your 27, baby Im 38
    That’s 11 more years that I have
    Lived, Luved, and Learned

    I’m a veteran at this thing called luv
    So if you tryn’ to be the #1 playa on my team
    It’s a must that you bring you’re “A” game
    I don’t have time to teach or tame

    Or play child like games
    You need to be ready and prepared
    To fill the fiyah of my flames
    That will leave your body weak and lamed

    I know you think your pretty clever
    But 4ever is a very long time
    not something a yardstick
    or ruler can measure

    I haven’t melted yet
    Hit the thread again
    Let’s see if you can make me
    Sweat
    Mr. Good Bar
     
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    make you sweat its a supreme beat
    that tantrum make you wifey whats next/
    besides showing things you never thought possible
    a real man can whisper thoughts to touch your logical/
    mental perception is something we all dictate
    like this luv 4 u and this bond we create/
    whats next is that u fall in love
    start calling my phone saying "whats up"
    Biting your lips grasping to every vocab-u-leary
    of the mind blowing experince but thats not new/
    sweety its so cool I got vets hook like food
    and this is u and this us and we can bind/
    grown together stay together make love all the time
    sitback and watch movies in a corner nestled soft/
    im your man your my queen if you leave thats your lose...