Black Poetry : MR. Doo RIght?

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies and GentleMen...
    Praise the Lord.. as I ask for his blessing..
    In my journey on my search for Mister "Doo Right"
    He aint gotta be that tall,
    or even on the cover of GQ...
    all he gotta do..
    is what a man should do..
    "Doo Right"
    Which is easier said than done..
    Ive met them all but that one...
    Ive met Mister Tonight... good sex and on to the next.
    Ive met Mister You could be my wifey.. but I already have one.
    Ive met Mister, Your My Queen... but im going to treat you like ****
    Ive met mister, I dont know why Im single. (theres no **$$y like new p*$$*)
    Ive met Mister, Your what Ive been looking for.. (but Im not ready for you)
    Ive met Mister, let me hold you (but dont get 2 comfy, i dont want u 2 fall for me)
    Ive met mister.. Im who you've been looking for... (but im full of bull****)
    Ive met mister.. I know what I want, and your it. (But im 2 afraid to commit)

    So now..
    Im on a journey for Mister Doo Right..
    Who will .. Doo My .. Mind .. Body.. and Soul right.. all day every night.
    Mister Doo Right..
    who dosent mind hangin with me and my crew.. right.
    Who dosent mind.. me and the girls night...
    Who loves to wash my hair right...
    Who loves the way I hold his body tight..
    Who wishes he could be with me for life... right
    Who thinks of me... when im beside him... right.
    Who loves the way.. I screw.. him.. right
    Who cant imagine any other man between my legs ... right
    Who cant wait to introduce me to his family... right.
    Who thinks of what our kids would look like.. right
    Who hates going to work, b/c that would mean being away from me. .right.
    Who is infatuated with me, as I am with him ... right.
    Who loves me because, Im Misses Doo Right..
    Who dosent mind when we fight, because.. we gon' make it up.. RIGHT!
    Who knows Im devoted, because to him i told it.. right.
    Who takes my words and knows they are true because I have absolutely no reason to..Do wrong. Right..
    Because Im Misses Doo Right..
    Now..
    C'mon man.. Mister Doo Right Im lookin for you..
    and Women.. If you do.. have a Doo Right Boo..
    and you arent Misses Doo right..
    Give him my number..
    Dont be shy...
    Because I will... take ur Doo Right.. Tonight.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word and he's in search of such queen as yaself
    i'm surely the two will touch eyez .

    but i am ya do right right here ....sweet drop in search of !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmm Hmmm with all the head bopping and hip switching included indeed! :D
    I know all too well what you mean mija love is its own blessing and curse
    but I trust that you are blessed enough to know him when the Lord sends him :) & then...
    Oh how blessed you both will be :) :grouphug:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    well

    poet i can be everywhere at the same time

    just kiddin'

    i wish you all the best
    navigating between the suckers and the wannabe playaz

    keep the head up poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well poetess, you've entered many a woman's mind...quite disheartening, isn't it? Do believe though, he is out there. Such a well posed piece.
     
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    Hey sis... this made me chuckle and made me nod my head and say "yep"... but then you know what came up in my sprit..

    "He that findeth a Wife, findeth a Good Thang, and obtains favor with the Lord"

    So STOP your search sis, and let him find you, and if you are where you are suppose to be in the Lord (your spritual walk), I'm sure all will be just fine, you will be all he needs and he will be all you need.

    Now on the flip side of that, if you feel you have to help the Lord out in being found, be ready for much more DRAMA... trust these are words of experience/wisdom. I know each and everytime I've tired to assist, I just made a mess of the mess, and trying to clean up is a mess.
     
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    Now I'm just the man you're looking for cause my last name just happens to be Wright you'd just have to drop and the W and Bam!!! I'm Mr. Right! Ofcourse I like the contrast in this from the Mr. Wrongs to the Mr. Right! Well Done Again!
     
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    i feel you all the way..i liked the ending it made me laugh although you were probably very much serious..lol....
     
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    can you say "Mr. Info"..........

    lovin't the play and wit of this: my poetic manifestation of love

    :blowkiss:
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love...
    from the bottome of my synapse
    to the top of my aorta...
    (heart)

    Info.. Come on dowwwwn! (yea.. get ur butt to va.. youve won our lottery)

    Versatile... wcb, you were dearly missed. When all u feel is pain, laughter is beautiful.

    Emmissary... you know your WRONG.. cause if you were right.. you would have been keepin me warm last night!

    Sonnee... Girl i love you, always with a bit of wit out of nowhere.. bringing calm.

    Watz... who you tellin? Im so tired of some of these circus acts!

    D'S'S... lol... well be here now dangit!

    Triniti.. you are such a breath of fresh air.. thanks for the love.. wcb!

    Rich.. hey hunny bunny, thanks for the love.. and support.. always look foward to your reviews.. :pool:
     
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