Black Poetry : Mr. Do-Right

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Do-Right
    is everything but ~~

    Driving me emotionally
    crazy into hazardous
    thinking

    Your carriage is
    stallin'
    stoppin'
    goin'
    brick wallin'
    me from the
    fast into the
    slow lane...

    I can't see your
    headlights
    in the dark~
    but when I get out
    of the car seat
    I can read
    your heart
    ...and all signals
    are a 'go'

    What exactly is it
    that you
    do and do not
    want me to know?

    I don't deserve
    to be driven
    wreckless/ly
    when I need a
    ride - I need
    to know that
    I can depend
    on you
    ...to get us
    to our intended
    destination
    safely

    But your behavior
    is eradic and
    inexperienced
    why do you run
    from me when I
    am only wanting
    to be with you/

    Is that far too
    much to ask of you?

    I deserve to be
    treated right and
    exclusive/ly --

    stop rev-ving up
    the engine inside
    of me ~ please

    And if you're not
    ready to
    'buckle up' --
    don't
    test
    drive
    my love

    All I ask is
    ~~Mr.~~
    Do Right by ME


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yes N2...

    Flow on wit ya bad self!!!!

    I'll always "Do Right" by ya!!! :wink:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess that is plain enough.
    excellent flow

    Thank you
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    All I can do is smile back at ya'!

    Thanks for the :heart:
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz~

    You are correct!! Thanks for the read!!
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say it

    sustuh!!!!

    A
     
  7. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know that's right sistah!!! Tell it like it is!!!:)
     
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    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm tryin' to think of some clever
    automotive slogan to include in my post..
    " Buckle up , it's the law "
    and " you could learn alot from a dummy "
    comes to mind. - LOL !

    but i've been in both seats in that car
    w/ the erratic driver - and
    you can't start " the pursuit of excellence "
    that way -
    i understand you on this one, wordbond.
     
  9. blakverb

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    Nice piece.

    one love,blak
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce~

    Ya' know imma say it! :lol:
    Thanks gyrl...!!
     
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