Black Poetry : Mr. Black Man - FORGAVE ME LAST NIGHT!

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  1. IntuitioninMD

    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    Mr. Black Man -FORGAVE ME LAST NIGHT!

    The desire to be with him
    I could no longer fight

    I am Addicted to him
    He makes me so high

    When I see hIs face
    He makes me smile

    FOrever is hIS arms
    Is where I want to be

    We became one
    like we were possessed

    We agreed to keep it a secret
    because we both now look - obsessed

    I said - "This is an illusion"
    "I am not really here"

    He said "This is the...
    SOLUTION"

    We completely let
    our evil spirits free

    But in the middle night
    we could not sleep

    We both were on edge
    so I tried to leave

    But next to him
    Is where he wanted me to be

    He asked me
    "If I am sorry"

    ANd I said
    "that I am"

    I am not sure if we are back at the beginning
    Or the END

    We promised not to do this
    We said that we will only be FRIENDS

    Where is this going?
    I have no idea

    I am too busy
    being so high on him

    This addiction is worst
    than my caffeine pills

    I feel like we are going around in circles
    or up and down the SAME hill

    It happened, It's done
    Now I am in my personal Hell

    Mr. Black Man FORGAVE ME!
    NOW I NEED TO TRY TO FORGIVE MYSELF!!!



    I love you Mr. Black Man :luvu:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    once u forgave you was forgiven within self
    i really enjoyed this piece sista Queen flow on
    wow!!!!!
     
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    thanks $$RICH$$
     
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    most welcome belove sista it was pose'd beautifully
     
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    This is so real it's surreal!!!
     
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    Nice poem it was deeply felt. :tweety: :tweety: :tweety:
     
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    thank you... sometimes... I wish we were able to put our lives in a poem first and then live it... :oops:
     
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    I feel that way too sometimes sista. Thats why I write. :lips: :idea: :lips: :idea:
     
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