Quiet Poetry Lounge : MOZAMBICAN MYSTERY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Dec 19, 2003.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MOZAMBICAN MYSTERY

    Last night I died in Casablanca
    And found my heart in Malawi
    I watched the stars in Madagascar
    And sailed across the Galilee.

    I walked the fields in Mozambique
    And climbed the hills of Tennessee
    I caught the sun in Buenos Aires
    And chased the moon in Sicily.

    I met the Rose of Spanish Harlem
    We danced all night in Tripoli
    She followed me across the ocean
    And we made love from dawn till three.

    I was reborn in Abu Dhabi
    I found my soul in Waikiki
    Tonight I'll sleep in Costa Rica
    And live a life that's winterfree.
    ----(5/19/03)OldSoulĀ©


    The Visual Version
    MOZAMBICAN MYSTERY
     
  2. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    i loved this. i was following you along.... i too live a winter free life. well done.
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    nice..
    heated..
    and fluid...
    in your sun place
    your brown/black space
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i really love this piece keep flowin i'm listening
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this
    nice write flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You took us there, and oh what a wonderful journey!
     
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    my goodness you flow are so smooth poet...lovely..indeed
    Peace
     
  8. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for allowing us to share
    in this very enjoyable journey.

    I love the title & your name :)

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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