Black Poetry : Moving On

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How is it I end up wit all the bad luck?
    I felt something tellin me "LEAVE", but im stuck
    Been done wrong, not strong enough to walk away
    But I'm making a stand, I left you yesterday
    Time to press on, ain't no longer your baby
    Like beyonce says... I'm an independant lady
    No more depending on you to make me smile
    The last time I was happy? ****, It's been awhile
    It's all good cause unlike you I'm making a change
    And thanks to you, I have a base to my game
    Ready for a surprise? C'mon baby open dem eyes
    Give me a little time, you'll see where the good **** lies
    Can't nobody stop me now, I'm on my own "big thangs"
    Don't cover your ears when the first round bell rings
    It'll **** up your mind that I'm the one that's got the prize
    You may have crused my heart, but I'm not layin down to die
    Never see my white flag, Cause now I'm puttin up a fight
    You'll never amount to ****, HA! My goals are in sight
    Bout to become the woman I was always meant to be
    Funny thing is your *****s is cooler wit me
    When it comes down to life, now I'm crushin you
    **** shame, since I was the only one to stay true
    Still don't get it? I'll put it like this...

    IM TURNIN AROUND SO MY A** YOU CAN KISS!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heated words
    one better know
    coz dis flow
    tells da show
    now u strong
    and moved on
    no more lie
    no more false hope
    see babe it was only a joke
    moving in a rapid pace
    to a true love
    bout to take place

    flow head on ! poetess....
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** girl!...this one is tyte:)
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    More power to ya, Alize! Nice read...
     
  5. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich u keep on tellin me a new love is gonna take flight...do you know something I dont? I don't see it!

    To lovely and angelicsage...thankyou I'm glad you liked. Now that I read it I think ****, that's pretty mean of me. But all I feel inside is anger
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside very deep within to the outter part da soul speaks
    the vision lay within i see it on a new rise yes a love so
    true is near when da tyme come u will know by the glow on one's face , be sure to open up and let the love in .......
    stay strong and sweet it's coming !
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh boy!!!! dis is tyte!!!well done
     
  8. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$! I hope that new love comes soon and takes the pain in my heart away!

    Story...welcome to my world. Thanks for stopping by.
     
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