Black Poetry : Moving Colours..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 27, 2005.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m sitting here at te Macdonalds on the second floor...
    My viuew is on the Flowermarket..and a little church...
    Its realy a beautifull viuew....
    So manny different people with their own walk and own thoughts and feelings goals and desthenations.....
    I see a proud mon with a black jacket and red baret and she wear,s a child in a orange carriebag.She passes the flowermarket and looks at the dutchtulps.
    and their remarkable happy colours not knowing that she and her child are remarkable coulours to.....
    You can see her walk and her newborn child....
    An old man sits in front of me...and just like me he is drinking one cup of warm chocolatmilk ...
    Wel im not shure if its warm chocollatmilk it could be coffee.....
    anyway he is enjoying it....
    and just when i wanted to say "' Nice cup huh"' his eyes close and he ducked away in dreamland with both of his hands under his chin and cheeks .......
    hi hi hi funny to see....
    Than he looks up and smiles at me.........and just as i wanted to smile back ...
    he fallls asleep again....
    Pour man........
    how was life ......was it hard? tell me ....is there so much more waiting for me?
    He looks up again and smiles again.......oeps there he ducks again..
    :hiya: he looks satisfied......
    maybe it wasnt so hard..........
    he must have had some joy in his life ......
    cause it was a real smile....
    at least he still knows how to do it......

    smiling..

    I look out of the window again into the crowdy street..
    i see this little store "'tulps from Amsterdam"'
    Than suddenly this car stops before this store its a big one....
    A father with a a little girl on his arm steps out of the car.....
    he wears a darkbleu jacket and the child wears a brown wooly jacket..
    The little girl smiles satisfied ""wintertime and the living is easy""
    "'daddy i rich and youre mommy is......?'' Where is youre mommy?
    it doesnt matter now......its just daddy now "'daddy,s daddy,s yeah more daddy,s yeah and spending time "'
    One of the cleaning persons of Mac is looking at me...
    I can read his mind the way he looks"..""that lady is sitting there for a long time....""
    And i,m thinking i,m doing nothing just sitting here relaxing...
    no Bom or sumthing ........
    just watching life...
    I smille at him wich tells him enough and he leaves....

    A tram passes by and i,m looking at the people in it who are also looking out of the the window of the tram ..looking at the people who are passing or riding by ......(can you still follow me?)
    On some of their faces you can see their thoughts.....

    HEy there is one that looks up and sees me :hiya: :sand: and smiles and i smile back.I dont have much my pocket right now but i have this moment....
    cool :juggle:
    The people in the tram are looking at the people in the cars who are passing by...."'we like echother dont we ?..........yeah yeah atmid it waving with my little finger ...like got ya ....""



    Somethimes we see someone with the samejacket or trousers....
    you think "'hey i got that one to .....same tast?mm? how is youre life ?
    I see a little child in the back of a car and is looking up...
    So manny things so manny colours...
    mm now we have sumthing in common child...
    People are crossing mizz Zebra direction Rembrandsplein...
    I see a PINK rastaman on his bike ....uhh mm? is he a rasta man? he wears redgreen yellow and black ......that doesnt mean anything ..maybe he likes the colours .... But he COLD He COLd .....You got some afroblood?
    No you dummy ....I,m thinking right now its freezing cold outside...
    Owiee... :spinn: now ..oewaaa :look:
    i see two lovers who are holding eachother tight and they are looking at this little store where they sell "'delf bleu "' he gives her a kiss....... :spinn:
    owiee now that is always good in the freezing cold ........
    than they start dancing to stay warm ... :great:
    And i,m thinking good.... :hearts1:
    I,m also thinking ......
    "'how about that kiss ? didnt that made you warm"'.......?

    ""Oh noooo she is dancing about that kiss"'

    ohh...dummy..
    and he is to :dance1:

    Last round ...last sip off my cup.

    I see this old lady standing in front of the traffic lights.......
    but she stands so still...
    Come on now move woman you might turn into an icerock....
    Does she have streetfears ?
    Oh i see it now you dummy she is just taking her time...
    She looks left and than right with a kinda RObocop movement.But youre right woman ...take the time for youre life before it is taken from you.....

    One of the cleaning persons of Macdonalds is looking at me....
    I can read his expression on his face....
    That lady is sitting there for a long time...
    and i,m thinking ...
    I,m doing nothing just sitting here relaxing.....
    I,m smiling at him..while he wakes up the old man...
    who, had took the table as his pillow...
    I smile again t him wich tells him enough....
    and he leaves....
    with the old man....
    the cleaning perso looks back at me ones again..
    with an expression on his face...

    as if he was thinking ......


    "'why not"'
     
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    the beauty colour bring to daily life
    and sharing a smile worth ya while
    in movin colours around u daily
    flow head on sis
     
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    Lady, you've made me smile... which tells so much about your intimate peace ~
     
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    i loved everything about this piece....
     
  5. moham

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    Hey beautiful observer,

    this was nice and warm! Regular life seems so special here (and it is)...

    Do ya thing, Lady

    moham
     
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