Black Poetry : Moving Chins

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jul 3, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Self Expression
    Seems
    To take everyones frustration
    When couples keep going through
    Unlimited
    Required conglaberations
    Every phrase linked wants to
    Be
    The one dripping in fruitation
    All the sudden the realization
    Of
    Our familys recipation for cakation
    Secrets with added bapitization
    Heat being kept for generations
    Lake looking frosting coming accross
    like
    Deep original waves not only generated
    By the Beauticians of yesteryears
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sister candeesweet :hi: yes sis this is deep. your metaphor script a whole new level
    as you trace back and come back. Thank you for posting
    Peace and Love:grouphug:
     
  3. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea Sis seems sometimes relations of all types never change. Always same basis to form from. I write to try to understand this world we live in.
    My pleasure in sharing!
     
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    Feeling every word, Sister Candeesweet. Self express on!

    (smile)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can always count on You Sis to feel me! Thanks:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tru dat ....we all try to understand it
     
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    I'm lost... would you mind posting an explanation? I'm keen on learning. The curious mind..
     
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