Black Poetry : Moving Backwardly Forward In Notion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by brotherman, Mar 22, 2002.

  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Irresistably edible you appeal like eye candy
    warm my innermost thoughts with your walk like fine brandy
    That is the only connotation equated in my mentals
    so the only consolation I have is coincidental
    meaning, these natural highs -you induce with your vibes
    attract then push me back to hide behind staring eyes
    you'll never know these secrecies that I have for you
    intimate with all intent to get the best of you
    seems like a quest, oh yes, to test but not just yet
    first let the elements of motion engage like verbal sex
    moving images of wonder that warrants investigation
    directing paths in one direction like one-way intersections
    creating mad interludes with this dude once subdued
    you'll be denouncing bread and water for my "soul food"
    and not even know the reason for breathing my love potion
    when all it takes is giving in to the notion...


    ;)
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Luv'deded this line especially !!! :toast:

    nice peace

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi. I am glad that someone is appreciating my style of poetry. The environment is new to me so I will continue to post and see if the peoples in here can comprehend multi-directional subject matter. Thanks for the love!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummm!! nice flow ...........love how u express in a notion
     
  5. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U doing it up in here, aren't ya! Show em how the Gump
    represents! Keep puttin it down... I follow your flows! :)
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boi u hot up in Hea!!

    Diggin the flows fo real!!
    Tyte scribing Bruh!!
     
  7. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "multi-directional subject manner"
    u r so wild!!!!!!

    keep the flow going!
    dee
     
  8. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was just sitting with zano smoking apples with jimi hen -that's al
     
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    I'm wondering what made you write this one
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am enjoying your style up in the kitchen....the more diverse the flow, the better the meal...

    keep it coming howsuneva you please

    alyce
     
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