Black Poetry : Moving Along

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moving Along

    Write art and tonight dark and my bright heart started
    to beat faster because of a the street disaster I departed
    my seat to notice a head on collision had misled the visons
    of many, folks came to the smoke and flames many decisions
    were made by the police as we rubber neck like lovers of wrecks
    drivers of the accident desire luck as the fire trucks started to collect
    and spray with water it was like the towering inferno starring OJ
    Simpson, a real fender bender nothing tender about this can’t play’
    And text while driving its complex surving a mingle incident
    Like this one, it was negotiations on location nothing heaven sent
    Got some WD Forty stayed in the garage bold and it played a large
    Role in getting my lex repaired but sex aired hardcore can’t dodge
    The TV, look got plenty of bling in devastation and anything
    In relation to making or creating rhymes or desining lines cling
    To my brains other words it right down my alley some clowns
    In the valley and don’t know this so I flow brisk and stay renowned
    Coming with mixtures like plumbing fixtures hosting main events
    Lame and frequent like Michael Buffer “Lets get ready to rumble”
    Now these rhymes are affixed to walls and floors make cats stumble
    On door mats my metaphors and stats tore hats mad whackness stumble
    And fall tumble all stupid, my brain hype like a drain pipe stuff run right
    Through it, tight and brew legit like coffee dang a softy might
    Chicken out, because of the way I’m kicking clout all night
    Look I’m on the streets coughing but my heat often alleviatates pain
    And creates game
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The streets has been, for a very long time, our worst enemy!
    Great write poet.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight Move
    Brother rhymebad

    This flow full of deliver.
     
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