Black Poetry : Move...Moved...Moving

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Apr 21, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Move me with the words you
    speak dusted with flakes of gold
    through the dry arnaceous
    sands at the seat
    of the Atacama Desert;
    I'll unfold ~
    Commit your soul
    in spans of time
    for reciprocal continuity
    scribe me into
    your world of proses
    stamping me with a seal
    of your own approval;
    then seize my body
    in its full
    renewal of
    sweetened marmalade preserve
    semi-liquid filled colloidality
    let percipience be our guide
    ...for whatever method(s) you
    may so choose
    resolved by our purpose--
    so we shall
    then be moved


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With passage like this, ya always move me ta move all "N2URSOUL"....

    Lovely piece YOU!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Gurl

    You always,lift me in to your soul gurl,Love this one and feeling ya.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE WAY U MOVE ME
    AS WE MOVED FROM HERE TOO THERE
    NOW WE R MOVING TOGETHER IN LOVE
    KEEP MOVING ME AS U DO N2.......
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll do whateva...

    I can to keep movin' you my brotha...!
    Thanks for all the love
    and thoughtful praises
    you've been sending my
    way on each prose I've written!!

    Much :heart:
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    whatcha' waitin' on then brotha?
    Get to movin' on N2urSoul....
    hell ya' gotta pass over the midwest
    when ya' leave Cali on your trekk to
    Jersey....
    so, get at me! :tongue:

    Much :heart: Thanks for the read!
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Storm~

    I'm glad the SoulurN2 has that
    affect on ya'.... ya' getz lifted
    erry tyme you stop by my shop!

    Thanks for the upkeep!!
    Much :heart: from your sistah!
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    moved me...

    surely your wordz speak 2 tha soul~!
    Look forward to reading more!
    ~Peace and Love~
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twofish...

    Thanks for swimming
    by for the read!
    Glad it moved you the
    way it did!
     
  10. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am in awe of yo style....
     
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