Black Poetry : Mourning Losses

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Oct 30, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost love
    Lost heart
    Lost friends
    Lost opportunities
    Lost jobs
    Lost innocence
    Lost youth
    Lost money
    Lost trust
    Lost hope

    Lost (insert your own here)
    (here)
    and (here)

    Now sigh
    Feel the longing
    the aching
    the pain

    Let the anger begin
    the tears rain
    Let it out
    let it go
    get it over with

    Look forward
    see ahead
    move on

    Now what will tomorrow bring?

    :)
     
  2. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost words......at this flow....fantastic
     
  3. wildflower7

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    smiles... peace... sweet relief.... -7:spinstar:
     
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    i like this...def dif & i have to go with wildflower7..
     
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    one's lost another gain
    da pain is banggin' da brain
    what a shame
    da peace is within
    i'm here my friend
    dis was hittin' wit a twist.........
     
  6. elayne.

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    gaylee.


    i swear!... when i got to the end of this peace
    the 1st thing i thought was... "relax, relate, release"
    & i enjoyed the read. thanks for the lesson! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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