Black Poetry : MOTIVE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tranquility through determination
    a motive on distant shore i sail
    in the napture of your existence
    befound in the beauty of ya love

    I have a motive to love u
    instill in the essence u pose
    and motivate the spirit
    art thou my soul i hear your
    whispers through words behind
    the solo heart

    I have a motive now to cover
    you in my warmth without a touch
    my handz free yet caressing the
    tracts of ya body to mend the broken
    and replace the pain to a rejoyice

    My motive is written page by page
    as my ink drips to a everlasting as
    my love through distant shores of
    this hostile world yet Beloveth as
    long as we are human souls and we
    do exist this cannot be i move deeper

    You my dear came crashing like da
    great storm of century in my heart
    and now i have a motive to love u
    not by the lust of a beast but the
    gentle tender comfort of a Man
    and i bring u gifts , treasures from
    the gallop of my heart & soul as
    our spirits mend in bond to one-some

    I cry not in pain, but for love u stain
    I hold a motive to rapture on a sail
    the journey will forever be until ur ready
    and the void of absence remain til our
    clash
    see Beloveth
    I
    have a motive to be and offer
    yet u over look me again, from
    the sparkle of ya eye and cross
    radiant beam of stars I am there
    just past the hour of day u see me
    behind every breeze u feel me
    and every rain drop u have taste me
    my love spreads wide and free
    just so u can see I am

    My determination to live in the spirit
    of ya soul and hoover deep into ya
    humble heart i pose no pity nor grief
    wit self doubt of ya love forth i knoweth
    blindly but real, i felt u as we come to a
    closure of our splash i want u to know
    how my love lone the day and the pen
    can rest on the motive of my love . :love:

    You become crystal fill with gems and the
    beautiful black pearl my Goddess i vow unto
    and the great Queen i adore and respect
    honor and give my loyality upon
    inside my motive is tranquility without
    limitation , give me u !
    I pose a motive to love u in endearment :deal:


    Dyamondluv Motivational T.T.D
    Nu~Wave 2005 Creation......$R
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece flowed like the pure essence of love dripping sweetly down onto the page. What a wondrous vow my brotha....wow....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sista watz it's a divine unconditionally splash from heart
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this moved me a emotion that cant be passed or ignored i loved how you posed this very visional and felt....

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true Angel it must be known within the soul
    it's a treasure to love .......Thankz a million
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww........my god some1 needs to get you a publishing deal.....
     
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    thankz LURK i'm on that now making it all happen in time .
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my you keep doing it and you continue to do that well I'm proud to say
    that I love reading your work more and more.
     
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    let me say Thankz from da heart for all the
    warm words and support u give ................
     
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    this was madd hot!
     
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