Black Poetry : MOTHER'S

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  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mother's are wonderful people to know :)
    Mother's are with you...whereever you go.

    We watch you laugh, :lol: :lol: we watch you cry
    We watch you as the years go by.

    Once you learn to walk, you're off to the store
    When you go out to play, we run to the door.

    School time has come and we're never at rest :idea:
    In hopes that our dear child is doing their best :read: :read:

    Now comes the dangerous years...talking with boys
    Away goes the innocence, :( the dolls...and the toys.[​IMG][​IMG]

    That it's time to let go of the one's we held near[​IMG]
     
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    This piece made me smile. Yes, a mom is always with you, and when you're a mom you understand why. Lovingly posed.
     
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    wow...........mother's of gold
    this was well felt have the power mother's hold
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname...thanks for the support
    $$RICH$$...thanks for always giving praise

    much... :luvv: :luvv: to you both
     
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    This poem was ontime I have been missing my mom's and she did a suprise visit from out of town yesterday and Im just feeling really good now! ;)
     
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    Caramelpython and Mom...

    :star: caramelpython, Mom...what a joyful time for you both... :wave: tell your mom this poem is for both you and her, so have a...good time and enjoy

    much luv...queentswana
     
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    oh i love this flow...very nice put
    we do all we can
    and enjoy watching them grow
    but then comes the time
    when we got to let go
    I really like this poem
    wonderful
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    from childhood to adulthood
    thats how the poem felt for me..
    made me remember by moms
    \ and that is a good thing..
    thanks
     
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    A mother's love is a splendid thing.

    Very nice.
     
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    MMMHmmmm there is no ONE like a mother :)
     
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