Black Poetry : Mother

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joemama0203, Nov 9, 2004.

  1. Joemama0203

    Joemama0203 Member MEMBER

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    Disbelief in me leads to malnutrition of our relationship
    Life is unpredictable and comes down on me harsh
    Satan is predictable and comes down on me harsh
    The lies seem true in my eyes but why in yours
    You love me unconditionally,right?
    Naive thinking you are above human error
    Never would you say to me... but you did
    New mindset
    Believe in God and myself
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of bonding peace
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    welcome this was very nice look to read more of u
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joemama, Mother sounds familiar-real and truth does set us free

    Very nice, Encore!
     
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    Pharaoh Jahil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee and nice poem.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to da spot
    welcome to destee
    continue to drop hot ones
     
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    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Welcome and once again Welcome
    nice drop and very touchy keep flowing
     
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    welcome welcome welcome
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    its always a painful relization when human failures become real
    but i am glad you here with us
    consider this home
    and may you find your peace :)
     
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