Black Poetry : Mother

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eternal mother represented as the sea
    Nothing on earth or in Heaven is like your beauty
    Subtle you are in the movements of waves
    Yet constant as the sun and its rays
    Richer than all the banks in the world
    If the oyster is the universe you are the pearl
    All rivers pay tribute to you
    Even the flattering sky tries to be blue
    All the creatures of the earth
    Can thank you for their birth
    Each nurses on your breast
    While you give freely never asking for rest.
     
  2. Kimdricka

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    That's beautiful.
    I think i'm becoming your # 1 fan ;)
     
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    simply beautiful and care free ......say it poet!
     
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    If the oyster is the universe you are the pearl
    All rivers pay tribute to you


    These were two very good moments in your effort!!

    Akintiunde
     
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    very nice BlkThunder ... i love Momma poems ...

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    thankx Kim-you to kind with your words
    Thank Cindy--We must give praise where it's due
    Thankx Akintiunde--appreciate the feed back
    Tahnkx Destee---I love ma momma
     
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    Absolutely Beautiful!

    This was quite impressive I particularly like the use of metaphors in your poetry and the sentiment was not lost on this reader, I enjoyed it tremendously. When people are compelled to think about what we write that is good. But when we touch people with our words we have entered into the realm of "Greatness"!

    Blessings On Ya House!:cool:
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx msluciousb
    I am trully touched by those words
    things that make you go hmmm......
     
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    I bow blessings
     
  10. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I bow right back..
    your stuff is off the hook...
    Thankx
     
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