Black Poetry : Mother to Daughter

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Dec 22, 2005.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been 8 days, 37 minutes, and 1 second and you still haven't called me
    I thought by now you would have surely wised up and begged to be back with me
    I mean after all you were the one who cheated on ME
    Had a baby with another girl and never told me
    Especially after you asked me
    "Will you marry me?"

    Yet I look at my clock and now it's be 8 days, 37 minutes, and 10 seconds and I'm going insane
    Because I look back and I remember not too long ago when you used to be the prefect man
    And
    I sit and reminise when we had our first baby
    Oooo how happy you were when I stepped out the car with our baby in my hands
    And you promised, no you VOWED, that you would always do right by me and
    Never cheat on me

    But yet I look at the other clock in the kitchen and it's been 8 days, 37 mintues, and 26 seconds and you still haven't turned the lock to our front door
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tic-toc... it don't stop

    Boyz will be boys.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the things they do and say dat misleads
    and often won't say i'm sorry or i made a mistake
    just walk away .........all in da game of life.
     
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    love the followup on this flow on poet.:star:
     
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    abba
    Abba, father
     
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    Nice poet
    Let em keep tickin
    Move on nice piece
     
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    Such a difference between men and boys, and some boys never grow up. Always good to read something from you Krazelyricks!!!!
     
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