Black Poetry : Mother So Dear

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Feb 22, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i'm wise
    allow me to make my
    mistakes

    stumble and fall
    then clean up the slate

    i'm wise
    allow me to make my
    mistakes

    i tremble inside
    unheard is my fate

    i'm wise allow me to
    make my mistakes

    i'm strong on the inside
    for long keep the faith

    i'm wise allow me to
    make my mistakes

    once played the fool
    but now cleaned the
    slate

    i'm wise allow me to
    make my mistakes

    make my mistakes

    mother so dear

    make my mistakes


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    making dem only give u better light ,,,,,,go on make dem!
    nice flow
     
  3. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD,
    Being at the spectrum of both ends
    mother and daughter, this poem really touch me..
    I love how you did it...beautiful flow.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pdelight,

    Ditto what Epip posted.


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep the faith. stay strong and focused and God will clear your path from the wind the rain
    the pain this day brighter than the sun in May
    and fresh as the air of the Spring keep doing your thing
    for
    she shall see what blessings you bring oh so clear
    please hear
    Mother so dear
    yet open is God's ear...

    nfinite love
     
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