Black Poetry : Mother’s Day break down……Letter

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mother’s Day break down……

    Dear Momma,
    Looking in the mirror
    And before my eyes
    I see…
    A 30 ish woman
    Golden tone
    Lost and confused
    Doin the best she can…
    Eyes swollen and red
    As her heart slowly beats….
    Wiping tears of pain…
    Needing you today…
    Mother Day’s break down..
    Once again
    Wishing for you to be here
    Wishing for your touch
    Wishing you was here to
    Talk to me
    Comfort me…..
    Teaching me the things
    I need to know
    So much I had not learn
    Wishing and praying
    Hoping and yearning
    Just to feel the presence
    of you
    Today…
    Lost and alone
    Mother’s day break down

    My walls seem to be
    closing in ….
    Hard to breath…..
    Wondering if God
    Would miss an Angel today
    If you just came back
    For a hour or so…
    Knowing your love for me
    Will never change
    But I am missing you
    And needing you….
    It may sound selfish to some
    But when you left me….
    Part of me went away
    And it’s hard to get it back
    No matter how hard I seem to fight
    I can’t seem to get that part back….
    Mother’s day break down

    Momma,
    I know you will never get this letter
    But some how some way
    I hope you can read it…
    And know that I need you…
    Momma I love you
    Just wishing you was here with me…
    Feeling blind to the wind
    And cold to the touch….
    Seem to cant move on…

    Mother’s day break down
    Once again
    Looking in the mirror
    And before my eyes
    I see…
    A 30 ish woman
    Golden tone
    Lost and confused
    doin the best she can
    but she needs a little help

    Love an
    Angel you made
    your Daughter
     
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    very beautiful and well felt the love flowing here
    a mother's sweet angel indeed
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Angel...
    of course my heart cries...it inspired me to the core. But I know that the letter you wrote...was read. and all the love that's pouring out of you...is heard.
    Such a beautiful poem...it's a master piece.
     
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    Oh Mama....
    I love this piece Angel...so heavenly flow so deep love it:wink:
     
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    No, not selfish, when it comes down to it, there's no one like your mom. Heartfelt and understood.
     
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    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God! Are words truly necessary to describe the beauty of this? Beautiful Angel.
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    such a beautiful, heartfelt poem. you really poured alot of emotion into this poem and it shows. try to keep your head up babe i know this time of year is hard for some.
     
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    I do think your Mother sees your letter, and I bet she's right there beside you - you just can't see her right now.

    :grouphug:
     
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    :luvv: thank you all for the support
    and all the love on this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    WoW this was great, Im def. feeling your vibe on this nice nice drop
     
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