Quiet Poetry Lounge : ...most of all

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, May 28, 2002.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love you most of all...

    and the hyacinth grows wild
    in the field where I lay with you
    the smell of purple
    blends so well with the taste of
    our mingled tears
    in the afternoon

    and I remember the joy,
    so much more than the
    times before

    JOY,
    that place
    wherever you are
    even with your furrowed
    brows
    and aching shoulders
    from carrying
    the weight

    just the
    brush of your
    body against
    mine reassures me
    & brings us so much
    peace

    you know I love to
    cradle your
    beautiful face
    in the palms of
    my hands
    I like being nose
    to nose
    so very close
    I feel dizzy
    like I'm falling
    into your large
    brown eyes

    the mirror to my soul...


    I love you most of all...

    ... the way
    your eyelashes sweep
    against my face
    I tremble
    and I taste the
    salty stream upon your
    cheek

    you hold me so tight
    I don't dare breathe,
    my hands cupped
    about your crown
    as you
    nestle your head
    between my breasts

    breathing in my very skin
    giving me warmth
    pressing deeply...
    lavishing liquid love...
    bringing us pure ecstasy

    and the hyacinth grows tame
    beneath the heat of our flame
    in the field where purple
    blends so well with the
    black taste of secrets

    we shared in the afternoon...

    I love you most of all...


    Alyce (c) 2002

    From "B-52"
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce u keep telling da sweet story i'll keep listening
    dis was beautifully written
     
  3. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is truly beautiful. And I'd say that no matter who penned it. :D

    :heart:

    Shade
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel this.
    Thank you.
    Desert Storm
     
  5. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...ahhh, do I hear you calling? My inquiring mind would like to know...is "B-52" a project, person, place, piece... or all of the above?

    this is extra beautiful, Ms. A.

    (sigh)

    Bert

    gonna huntchadown gul
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista alyce.


    once again... you have taken me "there"... :)

    reading you is always an experience that
    stimulates the mind & makes me want to
    rush right on ova to my own pen&paper just
    to try to "be like alyce!!" :D

    i loved this... thanks for sharing...

    itsallLove, chile. (umm hmm dats right!)

    elayne.