Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Dec 27, 2008.
...glad you cleaned that up at the end. the poem was straight...however, i find this descriptive of boys vice men. being the man i am, i would find it offensive if anyone REALLY thought of me in such a way.
let the river flow.
sho ya right most men yet boys just don't know .....love da flow
I KNEW IT
JUST AS I SUSPECTED! IS IT SAFE TO SAY SOME MEN??
JK, THIS WAS A NICE LIL DOSE OF REAL MEDICINE
you made me smile
i enjoyed this piece - a lot.
seeing thru things is the hardest thing to do
Great piece poet, but even greater when you seperated ...
"The Men from the Males"
Those last 2 lines brought the daggone thang on home. Tell the truth, shame the devil. Well done, well done!
i see u
this was hittin it.
needa send that one out on a myspace bulletin
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