Black Poetry : Morph'Us

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  1. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We went from holding hands
    Exchanging mental vibes
    Hold on…
    Can you hear me now? (3X)
    Our auditory senses were only stimulated by indigenous dialects without words
    We spoke in unison
    Without the need to utilize our voice box
    Binding kermetic terms
    Encrypting codes from the Egyptian mystery system
    Exchanging mental verbs
    We…
    Can you hear me now?
    Yes higher as we stood in unison
    In a militant posture in btw
    The temple of Maat
    Awaiting the Devine blessings to grant this authentic attraction that us foreseen
    Us exhibiting collective thoughts
    Us…
    Us writing rhymes without using ink
    Us taking mental notes of our mission
    Wait hold on….
    Can you hear me now?
    As our mission was gradually empowered by this variant influences
    Distorting our mental confluences
    And
    Building debilitating monuments
    Decoding and internalizing the wrong vibes
    Creating and entertaining the non-functional beings in us
    Us, us, us became non- functional creeds
    Creating a doctrine that violated I and I
    Can you hear me now?
    As he slowly cease life from this Queen
    I said can you hear me now?
    As our growth became saturated with recurrent episodes of ridiculousness
    And our presence constricted each other’s air way
    We scarred each other’s heart
    Waiting for time to direct
    Time passed us by…..
    It ticked, and ticked as
    We experienced Morph’us in the eyez of Maat
    Can you hear me now?
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    unqiue....i like it alot...
     
  3. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Lovelygoldenone
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! dis was awesome scribing here very tyte flow
    hit us up some mo of dis !!!
     
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    Wow................had me hangin on to each sentence.

    Ploe...........this piece was phenomenally "Morphic"!

    Loved it!
    Angelic
     
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    Yes! You are heard on many levels.
     
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    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Ya 4 all the luv