Black Poetry : morning wake up

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :love:
    Morning wake up
    soulace from da
    deep slumber of
    comfort ya eyez
    open to the caressin
    sunshine as da flower
    bloom forth and a sweet
    radiant spray of love
    cascade ova u
    as my kiss linger upon
    ya lips my heart dance
    in the lastnight showcase
    and the divine rapture
    is embraced my hand
    trace ya body soft smooth
    skin crossing into our sweet
    moments from last night
    as my letter lay beside u
    knowing my return
    and that i so loveth u :love:
     
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    Last night showcase
    Peace laid and the power of you
    Took over as my dreams took me to you
    In a valley of passion and love slumber
    as you embraced my mental
    and invaded my soul i released my heart to you

    dang what you tryna do huh?????

    lovely flow :kiss:
    can ya tell i enjoyed it..:)

    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Da humble loveth
    of heart laps around
    ya body to comfort
    da soul as day light
    beams the morning
    caress and warm touch
    harvest the reasons of
    da moment where it's
    all love in ya eye at
    wake up !
    Thankz sistah for the flow and hit on dis
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice companion piece to your "bedtime story." A love that one can sense whether before, during, or after one sleeps. Very smooth and sweet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhhhhh! watz u on target and drifted sweetly into the mix of it
    thankz sistah for the lovin support and reply
     
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    i feel the comfort
    loving the flow
    had to bring it back up!!!!
     
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    As I rolled over this morning, from last night's rumble in bed,
    you and your manly scent was gone...but I found your letter instead.

    I clutched it close to my heart, before I read what it said,
    I closed my eyes for a moment more...wishing it was "you"...in my bed

    But I shall patiently wait, with my letter that is eched in blue,
    so slide on in and again rock my world...cause I know, you know...what to do.

    I like this piece very much, and thanks for allowing my eyes to grace them.
     
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    until thy return upon ya essence
    my loveth linger within most welcome
    queentswana
     
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    Very beautiful!

    As I rise from a night
    filled with intense
    passion I strecth
    out my arms to recieve
    the caressing of the sunlight

    with my eyes half open, my head
    rolls around my neck to revive the
    energies we shared

    Then I see it! I become alarm and
    unsure! I pull your letter up to
    my face to see if I can still smell
    the scent of you......... I do!

    My body tingles every place where
    you laid your hands and I can still taste
    you upon my lips.

    Afraid to read what your letter says
    I slumber back into bed.....Place your
    letter upon my heart

    I gently, slowly...touch every spot
    where your hand has been and I
    relive that moment over again......


    Lovely Scribe! But of course
    you knew it would be!!!!!!!! :spin:
     
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    and once again rich ur words keeep us all going
     
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