Black Poetry : Morning Moments(I Love)

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moon’s
    glow give way
    placid fog slowly lift pass treetops
    mystically fade away

    early
    birds’ songs
    hush nocturnal harmonies
    morning glories stretch out wide in
    dawn’s crisp air
    as
    did
    I
    feel
    sunbeams stream
    through tree leaves and good morning
    kiss me

    to
    my eyes’
    delight blue jays
    and cardinals in flight, share
    the sky with butterflies

    dew
    droplets
    claim their spot on
    blades of grass where daffodils
    and daisies chill and dandelions lazily
    await the bumble bees
    to light

    morning moments
    (I love)
    to
    wish
    I
    could be…
    at
    the wind’s mercy
    in a clear blue sky to spy
    HIS creations that soothe the soul
    and thrill the spirit

    morning moments
    (I reallylove)



    Be Blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    those moment seem to linger
    like the touch of a gold finger
    i love these day on wake ups
    like shimmering sweet harmony
    into da skies of joy so free
    these da moments i live to see
    this piece was awesomely a treat
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this one
    It like that feeling you have when you first wake up and you just know the day is going to go right
    Very vivid imagery
    Great job poet
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Sir. Richness and Just Dat Nice!

    I'm pleased to know you felt the flow.:)
    Morning is my best time of the day!


    Be Blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLovve!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco:
    This is ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I Love the mornings also. I've been an
    early bird riser from childhood. Don't know
    exactly what it is but I love the mornings so.
    It might be because everybody else is still
    sleep. lol This fed my soul 4 real.


    Much Luv
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The dawn of a brand new day, the promise that it all brings. Your words had me smelling the crisp morning air Sister coco, this was posed just so poetess, much enjoyed.
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4Everlove,
    Theres much to be said about muted humans along with all the noise we make,
    so we can just listen to peaceful soothing sounds of nature. When others are asleep can provide us with that.
    Gimme me that and a cup of coffee and I’m cool.

    Watz,
    Yep, the dawn of a new day and all its possibilities… reason enough to love mornings, huh?

    Thanks yall... its always peace and I appreciate it, BIGTIME!:)



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    cocobutterskyn - The deft hand of the poet can make the reader not only see the morning but feel the morning, hear the morning and smell the morning. I, a night owl, read it and it happened to me. Only talent can do that. Now, I'm a believer. Thanks CocoB. Namyh
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Harry...

    I can rememeber my reaction to the first fog lift I witnessed. It was amazing! EVERYTHING has an order.

    I appreciate your visits to my penned thoughts, BIGTIME!:)


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes coco, was was a very calming and soothing morning! Felt good to me on the inside, like I had just drank a good glass of orange juice. This flo felt good going down.
     
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