Black Poetry : Morning Mist!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Early I rise and watch the morning mist, as I prepare for morning prayers and meditation.

    I turn within again to speak to my creator. To bid him please , my suffering ease and peace to the land restore.

    I gaze upon a place unseen and feel the presence of him unseen.
    He stands beside an open door and beckons me to come in.

    My soul once troubled is now at rest, my eyes once cloudy can see their best.

    The opend door I find within, a place where we dispose of our daily sin.

    My master of my soul commands that I be free in this opressed
    land.

    And all who seek to do me harm, instead fall captive to my charm.

    Down on my knees, I ask him please, to bless all that I know.

    And those unknown who are still his own, I petition for them also.

    I rise to see the sun not yet, and praise my creator for a thirst , now met.
    The morning mist is slowly rising, the suns sweet face it is still disguising. I remain in silent refrain and begin to pray again.

    For health and strength , wisdom and goodness and peace of mind for all to find.

    I gaze up and then I find, the Morning mist is now left behind.

    bjs (C):heart: GOD IS...:love:
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    truth in words, depth in spirit..i think i shall plant this one in the meadow and watch it grow into a bountiful bouquet of...

    peace.

    tight scribe poet...
     
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    Through prayer and supplication let your request be made known unto God.....This is tight!!!
     
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    IT WASN'T ME! BUT THANK YOU!

    THANK YOU MY BROTHA SCRIBE, BUT THE VIBE CAME FROM WITHIN AND I CANNOT TAKE ALL THE CREDIT MY FRIEND!
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!!!!!!!!
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Psalm 86:7

    Thank you Windwalker, but the gifts I share come from the creator and that is what he gave me this morning. All praises belong to him, for everything I am and hope to be I owe it all to him.
    "In the day of my trouble I wll call upon thee:fore thou wilt answer me."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within

    the mist of da spirit the light shine bright
     
  8. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: within

    Couldn't have done it without you, you inspire me to new heights and delights! Thanks sweetie
     
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    you speak peace

    to my soul today, mslb.....sweet peace. Just wanna thank ya my sistuh!

    a
     
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    mslucious

    I am feelin you on this peace....

    standing there bathed in the weak light of a new day, waves of peace washing over your soul...

    this brings a beautiful vision of a soul renewed..

    K
     
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