Black Poetry : Morning Has Broken

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by peppachatni, Mar 8, 2004.

  1. peppachatni

    peppachatni Member MEMBER

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    Twenty-four hours
    And the ticking never stops.
    Zephyr of thy lips
    The stiffening of Rock.
    May you lay atop thy burn of quiet concupiscence?
    That I may savor thy thrusts devouring my Essence.

    Nakedness entwined

    Love me from behind

    Caress in your grind

    Strumming tingles up my spine.



    ...................Passion!

    ........................Passion!

    Sweet Passion
    In my mouth Dear your warm release?
    Your taste,
    Sooo sweet.

    You’re MY Lover,
    My Half
    My Man
    MY KING!
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a very lovely poem
    I like :)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love the flava of this
    sweet release...flow on
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I detected some spiciness mixed in with the sweet....nice flow, keep writing.
     
  5. Justerika

    Justerika Active Member MEMBER

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    sweet bjesus
    I'm smitten
    like this
    Alot :)
     
  6. WISDOMDIVINE

    WISDOMDIVINE Member MEMBER

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    I dig this a lot. Nothing as intoxicating as the nectar of your king
     
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