Black Poetry : morning dew

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First Thoughts of Each Day Written For My Inspiration

    I really enjoy the morning dew when
    the sparrow chirped outside my window,
    it lets me now my day will be
    better than any other will;

    As I awake to this sound,
    this voice of security,
    it makes me realize that my
    life is actually worth living;

    There are times when I
    wonder what life would be if
    the world had not accepted
    or acknowledged my presence;

    Would the world be more serene
    or volatile, would it be more
    understanding or be judgmental;

    Would my presence have a great
    effect on what others do?

    Should I be concerned with this life
    that I wish would one day evolve
    into a positive aspect of the world;

    My emotions are jumbled like
    a ball of yarn hoping someone
    will come to unravel it;

    My mind is constantly counting the
    many decisions I make as I proceed
    through my travels into adulthood;

    My eyes perceive many beautiful things
    in a world full of darkness and gloom;
    my heart is overflowing with love and
    passion that even I am unable to contain;

    I look within the person and make my
    judgment from the inside first, then out;
    I don’t judge a person for what they have
    done or for their work, but, who they are;

    I am a realist, with a little bit
    of fantasy; I see things for what
    they are and wonder what they could be;

    I write them down to study at a
    later date for its too difficult
    to define, if I don’t understand;

    I write down my thoughts, either
    positive or negative, to recount
    in times of needed inspirations;

    I really enjoy the morning dew when the
    sparrow chirped outside the window; It
    lets me know that today is better than any other.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    D....

    reading you is like walking in cool
    wind blown rain... on a summers day...
    with the one you love...

    refreshing & sweet... thanks for sharing.

    AlwaysPeace...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SIMPLY LOVIN' DES HERE
    U TOOK ME THERE AND BACK
    THANKZ
     
  4. Desert Storm

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    Lovely

    Awsome poetry dnommo. Thanks for the read. I love readin ya.
    Desert Storm
     
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    Hey there dnommo

    Seems you were beautifully inspired!!:)
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA,

    you got me thinking...like...really? :D

    $$$RICH$$$

    just priming the room for a colab...

    Storm,

    no it is you that I enjoy reading...keep scribin'

    Afri,

    and you know this... :D:

    thank you all for the read...
     
  7. 8th wonder

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    I love this.... as I read it over and over and over....
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey boo. you are in real ealry this morning...that's cool cuz i likes it :D:
     
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    good morning my inspiration,

    looking for ya

    8th!
     
  10. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you found me watching the morning dew take form...
     
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