Black Poetry : Morning Bath - Repost

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Dec 31, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Good morning my queen,
    Let me brush the hair from in front of your eyes
    Kiss you on the lips
    And tell you I love you.
    Lay back for this is your day
    To be pampered
    Catered to
    Your wishes to be fulfilled.
    First we’ll start with the bubble bath
    Yes I will bathe every inch of you
    Feel the warmth of the water
    As you are made even warmer by the touch
    Of my hand on your body.
    Next let me dry you off
    Like only the Bishop can do
    Towel gently dabbing those wet areas
    Of your sweet gentle frame.
    Next I apply that sweet scented lotion
    You know the one I bought you from
    Victoria Secret, the one with the fragrance
    Of strawberry & champagne
    Feel the lotion as it glides over you body
    Your hands & arms
    Feet & legs
    Breasts & thighs
    I can’t get over how sexy you are looking to me right now
    As I kiss those beautiful legs
    And massage those sweet feet
    As you lay back & pull me onto you
    And say “what a good morning this shall be.”
     
  2. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daaaammmmm brotha!!! are you married/taken/spoken for? ;)
    that's some nice work and i don't mean just literally!

    ~And a "good morning" indeed
    as i pull you onto me
    do you even realize how you made feel
    treating me in a way none other than real
    as you applied the VS lotion on my skin
    you can't even imagine the thoughts within:
    is he real? is he mine?
    why is he so good to me? why is he so fyne?
    all i ever wanted, and more than what i need
    i found it in you, the man of my dreams
    Tonight before i sleep and when i pray
    I give a special thanks to the most high for sending you my way
    so after we finish this love session, and if it's aight with you
    I'd like to "give you a bath" to show my appreciation for you~
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A bath for me
    to show appreciation
    your thanks
    for me romancing you
    the way a man is suppose to
    treating you like the queen you are
    honored and respected like the woman you be
    no special thanks needed
    for what I do
    I do because of thee
    yet I shall partake of what you offer
    for it will serve to us to another level
    where only destined lovers dwell
    a place where I may kiss your soul.
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    workin well together i see

    nice drop bishop and u to kim
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    Great minds think alike I guess, I pulled something from my archives that I meant to post last week, and It was just feeling me and I was just feeling it...like I am feeling this poem! And then I saw your post...and I am like WHOA! I hadn't even seen your post when I posted that is just to strange...and fascinating...and KUUMBA!

    Blessings On Ya "LOVE FILLED" House!
     
  6. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my, my, my...words cannot express how nice this was. you had me fantasizing with every single line. very nice work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bishop break it down and slap da RED ZONE love on !!!
    keep da flame burning wooooooooweeeeeee!!!!!
     
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    i agree with ladysoul...................aww
     
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