Black Poetry : Morning After

Euphoria

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Ok, peeps, I wrote this after a eventful Wednesday night, hope it makes sense, especially with all the talking lines.


Morning After
"I don't know if we should, don't know if it's right."
Am I mean to feel guilty about what happened last night?
"Come on baby, come inside, I promise you wont regret."
Now the memory lingers, your kiss I'll never forget,
"OK, but not for long, I really cannot stay."
Once inside you brought me bliss and kissed the night away,
"All I want is to please you babe, to make things right for you."
Am I meant to feel cheap and dirty about liking what you do?
"I don't even know you, just know I'm not like this."
I didn't sleep with him, he's notanother number on a list,
"You're the first girl I've brought home, besides you know my name."
After spending a night with Ben, I'll never be the same,
"Alright i'll see you later, I felt my number in your phone."
Then I climbed back in my car and drove home alone.


15/3/02
*Emma*
 
Morning After
"I don't know if we should, don't know if it's right."
Am I meant to feel guilty about what happened last night?
"Come on baby, come inside, I promise you wont regret."
Now the memory lingers, your kiss I'll never forget,
"OK, but not for long, I really cannot stay."
Once inside you brought me bliss and kissed the night away,
"All I want is to please you babe, to make things right for you."
Am I meant to feel cheap and dirty about liking what you do?
"I don't even know you, just know I'm not like this."
I didn't sleep with him, he's not another number on a list,
"You're the first girl I've brought home, besides you know my name."
After spending a night with Ben, I'll never be the same,
"Alright i'll see you later, I left my number in your phone."
Then I climbed back in my car and drove home alone.


OK fixed it :)
 
Thanks guys

Thanks heaps for your support, I'm glad you all liked it.

J'hiah, don't worry a sequal will be coming, since that poem was about what happened Wednesday night, I'll write about what happened on Friday night. Look out for part 2 :)

Sherykah, I'm really glad you understood the way I wrote it with all the dialogue and stuff. The reason I "fixed" it was because after I posted it I noticed some typos.

Sunshyne, always good to see you reading my work, girl, I love your visits. Thanks for your comments.

Well I guess I'll start work on Part 2 :)

*Emma*
 

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