Black Poetry : Morning After....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The river runs slow..
    As the sun prepare to rise…
    You can hear the
    waterfalls in the back..
    As the birds begin
    to sing….
    And the scent of us in the air
    As the wind blows
    from the window……..
    morning light
    shines so bright..
    Up over the horizon
    A rainbow forms…..
    so bold and pretty
    As our souls begin to fly…
    the morning after..
    you hold me in your arms..
    as the tears of joy
    start to run again
    you wipe them with a kiss
    catching each one….
    the echo of
    our hearts beat in a
    romantic tone
    as the flame begins to burn
    once more..
    the love flows within
    fires of the flame
    and the mood begins
    to turn
    into the nite we had..
    the wonderful moment
    as our bodies laced in
    a ceremony of
    you and i...
    the morning after...
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah this flow was bliss very nice
    Peace
     
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    This was beautifully written, mzblkangel, very romantic and sweet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as we lay
    da night away
    til da morning after
    hot shower
    steamy love
    compassion
    caressin & rubs
    da morning after
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater and watzinaname ..thank you both..
    glad ya likes...much love :angel1:

    $$RICH$$
    A bliss of love
    in da air
    As we roam da
    morning after..
    twistin and caressin
    as the fire builds….
     
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    to a blazin compassion
    from da night of caressin
    we roam the night
    u and i
    to a feelin so right
    til day light
    da morning after
    as we shower
    and the things
    we do this morning !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rollin and playin
    in da mornin
    groovin
    movin
    lacin
    and dacin in
    da sunrise…
    blissen of
    chills thru da
    room as we begin
    to moan..
    roam
    my
    love
    as I
    search ur
    being..
     
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    Tsk Tsk...Aren't we bad!! very nice written my sistah. seems like we've been having some sensual thoughts there......I shall anticipate more of your "sensuality".....peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rahstagal....thankz glad ya likes my little poem..
     
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