Quiet Poetry Lounge : mornin'

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AgAbus, Jun 3, 2008.

  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to be accompanied by Jill Scott's 'Good Morning Heartache'
    http://www.imeem.com/reverendprejeanchamps/playlist/N4G2lT9y/heartbreak_music_playlist/




    *yawns*
    waking up to the
    familiar…the
    same pull
    this gundygut
    of a situation…his scent
    still lingering
    in my pores, my nose
    my bed sheets and the
    wrinkles of my skin.
    he
    yearns for the
    intransient
    the
    unknown..the unspoken.
    he bottled up my name,
    jar’ed up my soul
    and decided to chant
    my name
    after the first
    harvest moon.

    good mornin’ heartache…you old gloomy sight…

    he had
    a name that defied…everything
    a name, simple, in its look
    and pronounciation
    but complex in the
    hex he vexes
    my soul with.
    Hauting
    and irritating the mess
    out of my life…at every
    glance, at every turn
    he plays blues…for me Monday
    thru Sunday…got me
    pheenin’ and…and…and…
    each day I wake up with
    this issue…this thing…
    this HIM that
    can’t be shaked.
    can’t let him
    go…wish
    he’d go…
    wish he’d
    leave…yet i
    find me
    sayin’

    good mornin’ heartache what’s new….





    ©2008 ‘e(loK)utio(NY)st’ Inc.
    ~AgAbus


     
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    That kind of blues can take you and wrap you up like a tattered old blanket. It doesn't keep you warm like it used to, but you just can't throw it away. Keep flowing, I'll keep reading and enjoying.
     
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    something we all can relate on and know it will hold on to you like forever
     
  4. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you both very much for
    diggin the flow...it is indeed true.
    truth n righteousness.
     
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    Beautiful, i read it over and over again to myself
     
  6. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phenom...
    I thank you muchly for diggin the joint.
     
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    WOW...Hurting so Much you must let is Stay
    Serious Flow Siter
    SERIOUS lol
    Strength is the Key in the Cruel game
    :)
     
  8. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo thank you mami for putting a smile on this man's face.
     
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    another day

    so well put

    as in the day in a life

    peace poet
     
  10. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo So'ja...thank you my man for diggin me.