Black Poetry : More!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by realrawism, Mar 28, 2004.

  1. realrawism

    realrawism Active Member MEMBER

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    MORE!!!!!
    Want to take more!
    More, please!
    If I get more will more stop!
    More of that.
    No... that!
    I'm unsure of how much more I can handle!
    I'm full!
    Let me inhale.
    Ohhh what the hell, I want some more.
    Mine!
    Pulling, pushing, thinking, touching, wishing, dreaming of more.
    Look at more, talk about more and invite more.
    Smiling with more teeth showing.
    Learning how much more to ask for.
    More is given, more is required!
    When is less best???????????????????
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you flow this real tight
    how much more
    flow on
    wow
    nice drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not sure when less is best, but I'd like to read your flows some more. Keep them coming.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte drop lovin da flow let it continue
     
  5. whomikejones

    whomikejones Member MEMBER

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    nice write
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now give us more of your poetic style poet and let us see when more is 2 much. Nice scribe indeed.
     
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