Black Poetry : More To Love Than Loving

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    More to Love than loving
    It's not just gettin hot like
    the oven
    It's feelin ya lova when he
    is down and out
    And knowing just how to
    bring him out
    If it's a special meal at the
    end of the day
    hey!
    Us country women are made
    that way!
    If it's letting him watch that
    game in peace
    while you find some other form
    of release
    More to Love than loving
    it's all you got or nothing
    Like bills and ills and
    sometimes mistakes
    Like forgetting birthdays
    and anniversaries
    and vacationing alone
    Like feeling lonely
    even when your man
    is at home.
    Love is for the keeping
    not just for the reaping
    Giving and receiving
    doubting and believing
    No Love is more than just
    Loving...
    But that Loving part is
    a wonderful perk
    When your man had a
    tense day at work
    Sometimes take the lead
    and rip off his shirt...
    then sew it up again
    while he watches tv
    and you speak and
    he says "HUh?"
    Yeah, you know
    it's sometimes a little
    bit more than what
    we show
    bjs(C)2002
     
  2. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see, i like scribes like this...if only we all were humble enough to love this way...nice piece here

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go head Girl

    Thats what love is all about !
    there is soo much more to it !
     
  4. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS FELLOW SCRIBES!

    Thanks so much for the encouragement!
    Natasha thank you sista, know you feelin the vibe.
    And Derrick Jay, you wonderfully spirited man, yes
    I learned in my 40 plus years that love is so many
    things and humility must be at the core, order to
    truly love and get love one must give of self!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:love: IT'S ALL ABOUT LOVE!
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    **** feeling ya MsB
    KC looking good
    but it's nice to know that someone feels
    relationships are a good thing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MORE TO LOVE THEN LOVIN"
    IS COMPASSION WIT EMOTIONS
    WORDS OF WHISPERS LIKE A POTION
    CARESSING THOUGHTS
    AND FRIENDLY TALKS
    MORE TO LOVE THEN LOVIN'
    IS DA WARMTH OF HOLDING
    UNDERSTANDING
    SHARING
    GIVEN THANKZ
    DIS BE GOOD LOVE
    MORE THEN JUST LOVIN '

    WELL SCRIBE SISTAH POET !
     
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