Black Poetry : More than Friends

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 30, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’m taken away. I’m flattered. :blush:

    Candi Rain

    Combination rain drops. Come
    down on me. When u sing heavens part.
    Take me away. Your smile is as
    warm as those drops, tugging at
    my heart. (C) Hodee

    This woman I know told me
    she had dreams about me. :uhoh:

    What Am I to do?

    I've won this battle many times.
    It seems like it comes when
    I can't define. I can't do
    what was whispered.

    I’m committed you see.
    I live by my word of faithful standing.
    Desires from places so demanding.

    Do I let her unfilled dreams?
    Fade into another’s stream?

    She and I are friends yet she elevated this thing.
    Conflict now with my wedding ring.

    I know the course to take.
    But deep inside I feel the wake.
    Currents flowing.
    Taking toll on me.
    How far would it go?

    I do desire to explore what she said.
    Don’t break my faithful marriage bed!
    Chocolate syrup dripping, bodies sweat.
    Rapture taking a hold of me.

    I’m trying hard to keep my distance.
    Pulling forces won’t let me be.
    I enjoy her company coming.
    I’m not sure about the advances see.

    She is starting to exclaim out loud.
    How she feels, details of dreams.
    Telling others of this.
    Of me and her entwined in ecstasy.
    Only my will triumphs.
    I have to remain faithful.

    Not for my mate.
    But for my own salvation.
    What a dilemma!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed faithfully
    i really love this piece it took me somewhere & back
    keep bringing it like dis here got me all up in it....tyte
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quite a predicament indeed, do you remove the moth or the flame? Intriguing read, puts the reader right into the middle of the conflict. Very well written.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed, what a delimna...
    but consciousness, salvation
    and being true to oneself
    will deter the avoidable...

    Very stirring peace...

    Thanks for touching us with your words!
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, the power of temptation. But I applaude the strenth of the mind to resist it. :luvv:
     
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    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who said there ain't no faithful men out there. Loving your strength.

    Much Love
    Poetic Sista
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    body - mind
    intellect - spirit
    lust - love
    others - self
    aah...mind, spirit, love self....
    keep loving self...keep trusting self..


    like watz said...written well I too was right there...aah dilemma
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummmmmm Errrrrrrrrrrr Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :read:
    Hodee bear :look: lol
    calm down now lol
    I see someone done up and got you jus :smokin: hehehe burn on indeed :read:
     
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