Black Poetry : More than friends

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LeRoy, Dec 29, 2003.

  1. LeRoy

    LeRoy Active Member MEMBER

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    Invisible

    You are beautiful, intelligent, and black.
    What do I lack that fails to attract you to me.
    Simply put, I want to be more than a friend. Please....
    there has to be something that I’m missing.
    Just wishing that this thing would work, hurts, but it's
    even worse that I cannot express my true feelings.
    Confess, confess… I having something growing so strongly inside
    me that I must address to you. Am I transparent?
    Are your feelings for me the same?
    Or is it apparent that
    I should end this pretend game that I’m playing in my mind.
    No! I see it in your eyes.
    When I look into your eyes I am captured in a trance.
    The brown abyss which is the passage to your heart assures me of the truth.
    I gaze to seek the intangible.
    While exterior facets may lie to me face to face, I find no lies in any persons eyes.
    There is nothing that I am more sure of.
    I will not fear you any more, I have to believe what I feel.
    When I gaze, I do not see a mirror, a reflection of myself.
    I see your heart as it opens itself willingly.
    I see time stop.
    The connection I receive through you causes my heart to drop.
    I experience something so sensual.
    It’s as if our souls were separate pieces of music that combine to form a instrumental
    perfection. No, I am not invisible. I am afraid.
    How can you be afraid of something that you do not fear?
    Here on Earth, the one thing that I can trust are my feelings.
    Revealing the truth about how my fears form a ceiling puts doubt in me.
    My ascension past this ceiling will write a song for the both of us.
    I can't deny how I feel about you.
    After telling you the truth, then hopefully you'll too feel the same way I do about you.
    And if permissible, I will show you once and for all
    that I am not invisible.
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome LeRoy welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new lovin home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    very happy to be reading u in this community
    of love , peace & respect as we give love sho some love
    this was a very wonderful scribe here look to read u more
    peace :spinn: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    telling the truth can be very freeing....wonderful piece..welcome to destee!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee.com...
    feelin this flow...hope you share more....
    welcome again..:angel1:
     
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