Quiet Poetry Lounge : more than all that

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Oct 31, 2003.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you are so beautiful
    your entity
    in all its beauty
    is a powerful presence
    you walk in the room
    am i am taken

    your body
    spiritually is a sanctuary
    you are in touch with
    my spirit
    we were meant to be

    cliche as it might seem
    i love you
    the words in the languages
    are not enough to express
    this love
    nor are the colors of the world
    beautiful enough to paint
    the person that you are

    the brush of your lips
    'gainst mines
    gives me an ecstatic chill
    your embrace
    oh not enough words
    i am lost in you

    daily, i find a new
    beautiful thing in you
    you make me want to be
    all that you are

    i truly doubt sometimes
    that i will ever
    express fully
    what my heart feels for you

    you are more than
    diamonds, pearls, jewels, silver, gold
    even chocolate!
    you are more than all that.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your body
    spiritually is a sanctuary
    you are in touch with
    my spirit
    we were meant to be

    i like this right here...
    nice write
    love da flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very beautiful scribe lovin the flow here nice
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice writting love it!!!!
    still
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And this poem is more than all that. Great one to bring back blkangel. This piece so encompasses that oh so wonderful feeling that is simply indescribable. Wow....
     
  6. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Surely I agree with all the above, this is a awesome piece and thanks for sharing it.
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, this is beautiful!!!! Glad mzblk found it again.
     
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