Quiet Poetry Lounge : More or less

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Dec 7, 2003.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way u speak to me makes every insecurity i have vaguely clear, even frosted crystal
    its worse becuz u cut my heart w/out obsentity but words of insainity
    the more i try to be happy for u, the less i want to be your daughter and friend
    i never was your real friend becuz all u have is love for my blood and not for me
    I get this cold brain freeze from your cold words that isolate images of distilled water dripping on my mind ... making below zero feel even lower
    the more i try to be who u want in your life the less i want to be
    the more i wish i was your lil girl the less i am
    the more i try to except your future husband the less youre my mom
    the more i try to hold back the less your bite your tounge
    the more i slight my wrist cut my ears adn tare away my eyelids the less i feel hear or see your love for him and shame for me
    the more i frown at your words the lees i smile from love
    the more i try to count my blessings the less there are eachday
    the more you speak to me ... seems to make my insecurites vaguely clear even frosted crystal
    the more
    the less
    the less ..............i smile


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    be 4 i left home this is how it was....

    Gen~ETHIC soul
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again ya scribe is very nicely done and posed
    lovin ya pen
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice write...flow on.....
     
  4. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ty

    once again i love u guys and how u show much love...

    ~1~
    Gen~Ethic soul
     
  5. Bluewater

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    oh my
    feeling your flow
    much love to you :grouphug:
    Peace
     
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