Black Poetry : Moon Song

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've
    sung
    to the
    moon
    and
    to
    you
    ...
    And
    only
    the
    moon
    remembers
    I
    sung
    free hearted
    reckless
    free throated
    rhythms
    ...
    Even
    the
    moon
    remembers
    them
    ...
    And
    returns
    kindness
    to
    me


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UMMMMMMMM!!!

    DA MOON SONG U SING
    RINGS IN MY EAR
    I REMEMBER EVERY WORD
    THAT I HEARD
    INTENTLY I LISTEN
    AS THE GENTLE WHISPERS
    BE SPOKEN

    SO I HUMMM!!
    UMMMMM!!
    Ahhhhhhh!!
    IN TUNE IN DES ROOM

    SING DA SONG BABY!!:rolleyes:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    You are my quiet prayer...and I know that I've
    been blessed when you read ME...

    Thank you!

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  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...only the moon remembers"

    Wow! I've said this before there is at least one line in every well written piece that hits you in the head and sticks like a good hook in a song, well, the previously mentioned line is just that.

    "...only the moon remembers"

    would you mind if I used that as a title? It's got something stirring upstairs.

    one love,blak
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Glad it "took ya' there" mentally! You know I don't mind ~ let the moon reflect the remembrance of your piece...just hope it touches me....but then again, all of your pieces do!


    :wink:


    One.
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ups of course!!!! Mistress Poetess of Words!!!!

    :heart:
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  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Why thank you Mr. Tall, Dark, & Handsome!!


    Glad you're back on the boards!! Missed ya'!



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    Beautiful. Thank you for this.

    BE
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE

    I'm glad you liked reading this....

    Have a great day!
     
  10. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am smiling this morning...your sweet moon serenade is bringing me softly into my day!

    Thank you, sis!

    :)

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