Black Poetry : Moon of Manakoora

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Underneath the
    Moon of Manakoora,
    Soft breezes,
    Tribal beats and
    polynesian teases.

    The sound of
    soprano sirens
    vocalizing to word-less
    songs.
    The air filled with
    the scent of Jasmine and Poppy.

    Dinner by the sea,
    moonlight caressing our body.
    Feather-light brushes and
    fever-tipped advances.
    chinese inspired Love....

    Underneath the
    Moon of Manakoora,
    we make love to the sound
    of 5,000 waves crashing against
    the rocks.
    Climaxes of nightime passion with
    jungle intensity.
    When you move, I swim helplessly in
    dark potentcy.

    Underneath the
    Moon of Manakoora
    Breezes and Love and soulful bliss;
    love making to the sound of tiki drums.
    Waves crashing and sleep in the shade of
    palm trees.
    Beauty and Peace.
    Contentment and Ease,
    underneath the
    Moon of Manakoora

    Copyright 2004
    "Smokey Oracle" Publishings
    "Poeta nascitur, non fit."
    The Poet is born, not made.
    PropheticNsyght​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done i likes
     
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    Yes, what a beautiful, tropical scene you created here. I can just imagine myself, enjoying the island breezes....
     
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    whoa, this was simply breathtaking:)

    :heart:
     
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    very nice posed well
    ummm smoothhhhhhh i think i am looking for
    .....Angel
     
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    This is wonderful and I enjoyed reading this piece. Thanks and keep the pen hot.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, Thank you all for the love. You are all beautiful and gorgeous!!
     
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