Black Poetry : Moon .....................i understand love

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Moon Though you Shine in the dark...
    You have to find Youre Sun...
    to totaly eclip
    I sat down while you were in youre halF
    with my head leaning on youre cheak...
    and one leg swinging and my toes
    stroking the white night clouds....
    When you were Full moon...
    i probebly fell off and hurt my bumb..
    Manny times i tried to climb up there again
    cause it feld so familiar and safe...
    speaking sweet words and
    singing youre love lullaby...
    If we would have meet than i the streets..
    and we would sit down...

    i would probebly fall asleep at youre knee
    tired i was and maybe you to (tooty)


    ....

    but..

    oh these things you said...
    oh those songs you played toutched me deep down
    there...

    oh that big headed smiley going from right to left..

    you made me laugh.....


    made me sad when my heart was fair...



    but i understand......


    and love is no command..

    I wrote it in my poetry...
    It stayes where it finds his home...
    i ..

    just wanted to let you know..

    when you feel alone..
    and everything is wrong..
    dont be afraid to knock on my door..
    Remember i dont think ....
    this is what my heart says..
    I,ll always do my best to care....

    and if you want...

    hold youre hand...

    I never understood the purpose of this..
    and maybe neigther did you...
    but sumthing in my heart says i love yoore soul

    moon...


    I hope one day you become one
    with father sun...
    and know youre purpose
    in this universe and life..
    that you to ...
    find youre soulmate&beautifull Wife

    i,ll be that little star..
    giving you a twinkle smile...
    and i will wishper to you..

    shine.....


    it hurts ...
    but i,m gonna be alright...


    just shine ....love ..


    shine......
     
  2. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just shine... your flow does just that! bautiful piece.
    peacebeme-MsDy
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    LibertyLady

    This piece is very beautiful, sweetheart. a :grouphug:, a :kiss:, and a :crying:

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with me.

    :toast:

    :crying:
     
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    Nice nice, Im definitly feeling the sincerity in this flow
     
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    I particularly liked the visions of planets and stars that you planted in or heads, very nice flow.
     
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    nice drop
    thanks for sharing
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribing sistah queen love ya flava Lady
     
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    VERY WELL DONE SISTA LIBERTY!!!
    I LIKE THE WAY IT COMES OUT AT YA!!
     
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