Black Poetry : mood swings

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  1. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    people a muthafluckin tripp
    u get cool with them
    laff with them
    spend time
    get close

    then when they get
    in a funky mode
    they flip off on you
    with madd attitude
    doggin you

    spit words of fire
    any ol' kinda tone
    makes me not wanna
    get close to no one
    no mo

    laffin with you one minute
    snappin at you the next
    u just never know
    folks decide to let their
    guns blow

    looking down on you
    making u feel less than
    a man or woman
    not this time
    my feelings are mine and
    im not giving u the power
    to
    take advantage

    who needs friends

    a potential friend means

    a guaranteed enemy.............
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "spit words of fire
    any ol' kinda tone
    makes me not wanna
    get close to no one
    no mo"

    I feel you so strong, as much as I need companionship it seems that everyone I let in ends up hurting me for no reason, like all I tried 2 do was love and encourage, and they tear me all the way down - people are a mf trip!!!

    But you know we are your real friends right...it's all love here!!!
    2fish
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you on dis one fo sho....
    betrayal is a hurting thing indeed
    makes you not want to trust
    but then u let that wall down
    and it happens again and again...
    this speaks loud and i think
    we all go through this....
    i know i have....let peace
    and love be your power
    you move on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  4. Ujima

    Ujima Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The truth has been spoken!

    Stay focused,

    Ujima
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a powerful write, and posed very well. Sort of a double edged sword here, you don't want to be hurt, but desire a friendship, so you take a chance, and yes, risk being hurt again.
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    in your pen

    very raw and emotional...
    walking the steel edge
    looking to connect....
    sometimes the edge is sharp..
    nice you have a place to let out all the rage - in you pen
    keep flowing...flowing..
    and walking...looking to
    and connecting..
     
  7. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loving this flow

    Thanks for bringing the truth. You have nothing to fear any more. Your have handled the hard part. Getting it off your your mind. keeping flowing, I want to read more of your sweet flows, Love flows from inward out, then ebbs back like an ocean. :grouphug:
     
  8. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You definitly brought the raw emotion and I am feeling you on this
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah kid this was banging fro real yo so let me add some to this right here


    Have soft pride so cats stay off side violating and annihilating
    My religion creating precision sins, so I’m elevating and relocating
    Trying to duck these lying *****, look I spit mean script
    From between ships so there’s panic like a Titantic trip
    Across the ocean with a boss potion of sinking cream when
    My rhymes disperse, times worse today I scream for a friend
    Team with trend, try bring a peaceful dream end
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You

    can bet on that.
    Who needs friends like those? :eek:
    Nice drop.
     
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