Black Poetry : Mood swing like da weather

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Stumbled
    wisky
    blowing
    windz
    cascading
    swirling
    maze
    feelings
    breeze
    raining
    thunderous
    rapture
    of love
    stormy
    cloudy
    bliss
    covering
    yet
    sunshine
    breaking
    as hearts
    mend
    kissing
    a twister
    blistering
    cold
    summer
    heat
    hot
    desires
    manifesting
    soulfully
    as da
    spirit blow
    floating
    cross
    da horizon
    painting
    a path
    of
    existance
    emotions
    flair like
    lighten boltz
    crashin
    on waves
    of love
    Mood swing
    again .......
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! That was nice and really creative!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz wisdom7 da mood can take you into different emotions
    like the weather never know what's next rain or a twister even sunshine
    love runs in da same pathway.
     
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    blue skies
    dimple smile
    cherry moon
    my mood swing
    drifting rain
    showering thunder
    hot passion
    desires under
    love bliss moving
    north like a
    twister wit voice
    sweet lava
    partake kiss
    blasting within
    like love's fix
    moody again
     
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    Lord of the Mood Rings... aye.

    RICH, I love this - Flow-On!
     
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    I like the use of description in the poem...really elevated the emotions...

    loved it...

    keep the flow goin..

    Mz.Soull
    aka prizefighter16 :hi:
     
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    yo you flipped it on me here $$$RICH$$$ i didn't expect this
    feeling the art here playa

    you caught me totally off guard

    hahahahaha

    DSS
     
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    ANOTHER A-1 DROP BY BROTHA $$$$$$ RICH$
    nICE SCRIBE, FEELING THIS JOINT , DIGGIN THE WAY YOU LAID IT DOWN
     
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    lol........1poet you know how the mood ring can swing thankz bruh !

    happy you enjoyed it prizefighter thankz a million sis..

    hey so'ja man i put dat twister on this one as love was revealed thankz bruh !

    big thankz THE ONE for da love on dis one ....
     
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    This flowed like a smooth spiral, yes loving emotions can sway. Creative drop brotha.
     
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