Black Poetry : Monster

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hisili, Oct 24, 2004.

  1. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ever do something so horrible to a friend, a troubled friend already but still you think of yourself?

    One thoughtless deed where you have to ask yourself what type of person are you?

    To wonder why can the world be so cruel at times... and you do the same cruelty and yet you dont notice?

    And for those few sickening moments you feel no remorse for what you have done or who you have hurt.

    I have done these things and while I am not perfect that is no excuse.

    And now my concience far too late is eating at my soul, I feel every single bite, and I should.

    I pray and will pray that Jehovah forgives me, and my friends of few and many days will let the hatred pass.

    I shed tears for what I have let myself become, and have no one to blame for. I let myself become a monster.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home u found a community of unity
    welcome from above as i bless this scribe some love
    happy u here to join and share give love and honor
    do stay a while share a smile & flow poeticly

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    welcome to destee.com
    nice drop....deep mental
    feelin your vibe...

    Come join us in chat sometimes
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    hi hisili
    oh my hugs to you :grouphug:
    yes so deep within your release
    i feel all the turblence in your flow
    your flow clears the mind freely
    much love..please do flow on
    looking forward to reading you more
    Welcome:wave: to the family

    Peace~N~Love
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome welcome welcome home :)
    :wave: :wave: :wave:
    Mmmmm what a way to come to the board :read:
    *sigh* those are most definitely thoughts to ponder
    and what a way to end it
    *chills* wow
    hope you enjoy ya stay here at home with us :)
    the chips are on the table and ummmm dont touch my kool-aid we be jess fine QQ hehehe :)
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Only those who listen to their conscience will realize that they'ver done wrong, and want to make amends for it. Truly thought provoking, your pen scribes very clearly poet. Welcome!!!!!
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :cook: :ghost: :ghost: :ghost: :cook: :cook: :cook: :cook: I FEEL YOU PA. ONCE AGAIN WELCOME TO DESTEE AND I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE BEAUTIUFL WORKS LIKE THIS.
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey i readed another one of you.....



    and this one is good to...



    and yes if you ask him for forgiveness
    and you forgive others...

    he forgives you to..


    much love peace and guidance to you...





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
  9. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't be so cruel with urself!As soon as u see how much u've been far away of the justice,itz a proof of the fact that u r not a monster!A monster doesn't have heart,a monster can't regret!Be blessed n never forget that God has mercy for all His children
     
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