Black Poetry : monotomy

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  1. monay

    monay New Member MEMBER

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    Repetitive
    Abominable passions
    That are everlastin'
    That are irreversible
    Haunt my very being
    Sending delightful fright
    To my dreams at night
    Invading me daily endeavors
    Recognizing these are forever
    These feelings
    Without the dealings
    dealings being possession
    Possessin' some one to call my own
    Not only in dreams
    Not with my heart dying at the seams
    Not with love frying my soul
    Changing new to ole’
    And reality is real
    As I know what the deal
    Is
    But yet and still
    I continue to reel
    Off the biz I continue to feel
    O.C. on a wheel
    Of monotony
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    INSIGHTFUL

    monay- I enjoyed this insightful peice, thanks for sharing.

    1poetsought ~
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REP'N da FLAVA. aiight...aiight. i feel ya. just wanna WELCOME ya to da BIG house.

    you know.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya Well Felt

    welcome to da open flowz of
    Destee's place i feel ya openly here
    scribe on as i welcome thee....:)
     
  5. monay

    monay New Member MEMBER

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    Thank u 4 the luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome !