Black Poetry : Monkey suit to (GQ's Ambitions)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, May 23, 2001.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I donn the monkey suite
    And climb the monkey tree
    Selling my talents for a dollar or three
    We all just prisoners of our own device
    Trapped at the edge of the cup
    To much to carry to just give up
    Got bills to pay
    To keep livin this way
    People dependin on me
    To save the day
    Cant jump down or it all falls apart
    So I just keep swinging till I reach…. ?
    **** I’m back at the start
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Props for the follow-up Shaz!

    I hear ya...been wearin' a monkey suit fa years but don't swing like that...feel me???

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah, i'm feelin this too.
    i like it.
    -7 :spinstar:
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ and -7
    Thanks for the read and responce. GQ glad you liked it and as a matter of fact I quit swinging that way not long after my post (LOL)
    -7 You feel me........(LOL)
     
  5. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ummm hmmm...

    digging the 'swinging' rhythm in this flow!!:wink:
     
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