Black Poetry : MONEY CAN BUY

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, Jun 22, 2004.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with my money i can buy u a bed
    but not sweet dreams that run thru your head
    with money i can buy u books
    but no the endless scenes when n2 your eyes i look
    with my money i can buy u a finery
    but no the priceless memories of where we've held diniers
    with my money i can buy u luxuries
    but not the fancieness of our relationship
    with my money i can buy u things
    but not the love from a diamond ring
    with my money i can buy glasses 4 u 2 c
    but it takes u-2 look past my money-& see me......
    [/QUOTE] :luvv:
     
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    With money I can buy honey but I cant buy sweetness
    With money I can but clothes shoes and ice but i can buy hapiness
    With money I can have a false assurance that Im the s-h-i-t but when its gone so i a b-i-t-c-h
     
  3. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks lil cherry...
    cause with money you can buy..
    but you posed the question can you see?
    ...i liked that..cause we know
    "the best things in life are free"
    or are they?
    nice..keep working..
     
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    you are flowing on the deep side for sure
    this is just a wonderful flow
    young poet
    keep bring it
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to all in the house, much love for replying, i'm seeing new poets springing up in the house, deep lyrikz and deepy, ya'll new to me, and i'm 'preciatin' the reply, and Bluewater...........well you already know your love is heart felt, thank you and keep writin', scribin',and replyin',cuz that's what loves about no denyin....... :geek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wit money we can buy
    but true hope we have to define
    wit money we buy things
    but have to open up for freedom ring
    this was very lovely flow u on a roll
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you drop the house with this...it's cool and heavy. thanks
     
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    I was really into this flow, and I particularly liked the way you wrapped it all up at the end, nicely done.
     
  9. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH ,RICH ,RICH- what am i to say, you're like a big brother, that's a true BROTHA

    queentswana- thank you, i appreciate it, to the fullest

    wazinaname -thank you, i try to make the end the climax, instead of the cool down period

    thank you all for your replies, and it is with these words................I RISE! :grouphug:
     
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